I will never be able to love dolphins again. Wow.

you sir, are metal.

What do you think about these?
I wrote it for my upcoming funeral doom metal project.

"Desecrated Earth"

Heartbeat arrhythmic
Breathless, mindless
Desolate surrounding
Desecrated Earth
Dancing in silence
Staring in darkness
Desperate, disruptive
Desecrated Earth


"Calm of Seclusion"

Destructive consolation
Distractive illusion
Effective desperation
And longed-for seclusion
And longed-for conclusion

Here's a couple song's I've written. I consider myself in no way a lyricist, but I'm the only true metal musician in my town, so I figured I might as well write them myself.

"Disciples of Death":

The scum of the earth
The wretched, with no worth.
Who seek, exploit and thrive
Off of those who have died

Seeking nothing but gain
Off of those living in pain
No care for their lives
The disciples only see a sacrifice

Bleeding them dry of their life
A life they cannot restore

The sacrifice is complete
As the vultures flee the scene
The poor sacrifice is lost
Thrown into the ditch and left to rot
They continue to thrive
Protected by their own lies
Facts that seem honest and clean
One million hearts start to bleed

Another sacrifice is complete
As the vultures flee the scene
The poor sacrifice is lost
Thrown into the ditch and left to rot

You! Are! The! Next victim!

"Inhuman":

A beautiful gift
Offered to you
Why let it go
There's nothing to lose

Once it settles in
Life seems to be great
But always with the hint
Of something strange

But now it's there
You can't ignore
While it takes your mind
And slams it to the floor

No mercy or remorse
For the pain that it brings

Crushing your mind and spirit
Empathy is an unknown nature
It will tear you down
And smash you into pieces

Constant lies I hear
The truth draws near
Lack of humanity
Why do this to me?

Suffering your wrath
A mental bloodbath
Cannot take anymore
Watch out!

Crushing your mind and spirit
Empathy is an unknown nature
It will tear you down
And smash you into pieces

Crushing your mind and spirit
Empathy is an unknown nature
It will tear you down
And smash you into pieces


A little lame at parts, but my main focus is on the music.

Hey man, thank you very much! These were written a while ago and in a very short amount of time but it's a concept I have always wanted to write about, seeing as I have photographic memory myself.

The style of metal I play is more of a melodic death metal sound in music but with clean vocals. Thanks again!

I got some lyrics that I would like to hear other metalhead's opinions about.

"I am god, hate me!"

We are the children of damnation
That killed the seven-eyed lamb
In front of the gates of Gehenna
We’ll be holding the ram
We shall blame the lovers
And let the era of hate begin
And so shall the mark of salvation
Be burned into your skin

I think, therefore I’m dying
I am god, hate me!

What is the price of a common man?
Is he worth his hopes and dreams?
Is the value in his flesh and blood?
Or in the pleasure of his feeble screams?
In a sharpened knife, ready to strike
Do we search the blade or the handle?
Does the smoke or the fire burn the most?
In the flames of a burning candle

I think, therefore I’m dying
I am god, hate me!

Open your eyes that you may see, oh men of mildewed minds, and listen to me you bewildered millions. For I stand forth to challenge the wisdom of the world; to interrogate the laws of men and of “god”. I request reasons for your golden rule, and ask why and wherefore of your ten commands. Before none of your printed idols do I bend in acquaintance, and he who says “thou shalt” to me is my mortal foe!

The bullet penetrates your flesh and bones
For neither greater good nor evil
And he who states to have the righteous path
Will break the peace in upheaval
For so have I hated this fucking world
That I gave it my “unworthy” life
Still my sacrifice remains forgotten
Do we search the blade or handle of the knife?

I think, therefore I’m dying
I am god, hate me!





"Darkness Is Salvation"

Darkness is salvation
’Cause all beauty shall die
Destruction is fatal
Killing justified
Dread surrounding
Death when defined
The work is completed
All madness combined

What is death
If this is life
Eternal suffering
Global suicide
When all was lost
Then all hope died
Slowly decaying
Pleasures denied

Surrounded by the living
You always feel alone
Staring in fear
Upon your empty throne
There’s nothing left
Neither blood nor bone
And just like your fears
The darkness has grown




"In the distant thunder roar"

In the distant thunder roar
And so it shall forever be
How can thee live, how can thee breathe
If thee can not even see
Thy evil ways, thy evil ways
Making yet an enemy
In the distant thunder roar
And so it shall forever be

What is life if you dont live
It is not easy to forgive
When destroyed another day
When all is waiting to decay
Explaining it with rotten lies
Ignoring all the peoples cries
Spreading all the misery
Taking slaves not setting them free






"Common depression by right path cunts" (working title)

When I go to sleep, my only fear is that I’ll wake up again
You left me alone in this black hole, and you still call yourself my friend

When I want to die, I feel alive, like a cold wind crawling underneath my skin
Though when I lay down I always find you knocking at my door
What is wrong with me, I can get no rest because my mind is dead
No thoughts, no life, nothing left to say, like a man made of clay
Cutting out my heart just to feel the pain, though pain is all I feel
But pain is good, make you feel like a thing, and that thing is called nothing
Of nothing we are made, and nothing we become when our dust are gone
Forgotten and alone we die, then it’s time to fly like a wacky dream
Performed on a scene, without an audience, crawling up the fence
Of the prison called your life, cuts deeper than a knife, fuelled by strife.

I’m lying down to die
Want to fly through the sky
But my pain keeps me alive
Back to life I arrive

I want to forget all my accomplishments
My carcass to rot
My ashes be forgot
Though in the name of fear I live in fear
My thoughts made out of fear
Not able to care

When I go to sleep, my only fear is that I wake up again
You left me alone in this black hole, still you call yourself my friend

Here's some more I've recently completed:

Bloodbath:

My morbid fascination controlling my mind
Slicing, mutilating, smashing the spine
The thought of how much pain a body can take
I tear through the streets leaving death in my trail

Another lamb to the slaughter
I finish the last test, lick the blood from my blade
Once you enter my lab then there is no escape!

Killing is all just a game!
My joy, is seeing you squirm there in pain!

Bloodbath!
Killing Without any gain.
Morbid
Is my fascination with your pain

Bloodbath!
Killing is all just a game.
Insanity
Is the only thing keeping me sane.

Slice off a limb as you run away and scream.
Hiding in horror as my eyes gleam.
A disturbing smile runs across my face.
From the thought of turning you into a bloody paste.
Bones shatter, blood splatters, organs start to fly
My one joy in life is watching you die.
I continue to slash, though you're already dead.
With one more trophy I cut off the head!

Beyond:

Lost in a mental maze
Blind to the world beyond.
How can I face my mortality
When I don't know what's in store for me.

Live a new life
Or meet eternal paradise
All that you see
Can be taken from you.

Can we trust
A book
Written by
Man
To be our guide
Through
Life
And beyond

Live a new life
Or meet eternal paradise
All that you see
Can be taken from you

How can I live
My life
To standards
Not given!

Live a new life
Or meet eternal paradise
All that you see
Will be taken from you.

Full Circle:

I washed my hands
Where the water bends
I left my soul
By a stone that no one knows

I cleansed my heart
Tore the memories far apart
Crushed my dreams
To start again, pure and clean

I gaze with open eyes
A new world full of surprise
Colours spray
Over my old canvas of gray

See my life
Through a third person view
Watch slowly
As the colours are thrown askew

The filth creeps in
As I try to run away
Stuck standing still
As it gets closer day by day

It takes over me
Throws my life away
I watch slowly
As my canvas starts to gray.

Full Circle

I wash my hands
Where the water bends
I leave my soul
By a stone that no one knows

...Why?:

I've awoken
To darkness
I cannot hear anything
I cannot see anything

My body is numb
I feel no heat
I cannot smell anything
I cannot taste anything

Still, I go on!

Outside I am watched
Like a rat in a cage
They do not say anything
They do not do anything

Machines pump me life
No matter how much I resist
They do not know anything
They do not feel anything

I cannot feel anything
Still, I go on!

Please set me free!
Please set me free!
Please set me free!
Please let me die!

Honestly, the below one is on no particular motive. I was wandering around some goregrind lyrics, and was tempted to write some of those stuff myself. Still, I have no idea on what I have just blatantly penned and I wonder if the themes between the lines have any relation with one another. But I seriously look forward to some comments

<b>“Goremageddon Prophylactic”</b>

Necro-intestinal curvature unbolts
Diagnosing the internal edifice of disassembled guts
Coffin-bred ailment repulsing atrabilious refinement
Eviscerescence excavates inward
Seeping of putrid fumes outbursts
Chronozoic embryonic smolders
Reeks of moldered reparation spawn surpass the leeway

Dispersion, elation, molten to-flesh aversion
Skewing the living bladders
Smothers masticated passage amid the diaphragm and the respiratory tract
Drink of pus outdoes, cryptoxicated pores of inward diarrhea
Sticky gist shades the digestive passage
Sucking out the eyeballs, generic visceral secretion from the eyeholes
A Gynecologistic logic perplexed upon this anonymous mal-infested devolution
Delegation of innards from exonerated meat to contamination
Malformed immunity ascertained

Saturating, soaking prophylactic convulsion of muscular masses
Inundating the polluted orifices, moist skin and vulgar tissues
Chunk by chunk, chunk by chunk, chunk by chunk, the cadaver discharged
Dead-festered plasmas and blotted blood blistering over the impetigo skin

Sorry for such a late reply. No, we haven't recorded anything yet, still trying to improve the unfinished originals.

Interesting, a little generic, but still interesting, what kind of metal do you intend on playing this in? I'd actually like to hear a recording (but not as much as I'd like to hear "The Art of Self Devouring" on a recording, yours are good, but that is just, awesome)

These lyrics are alright, but to me they didn't really tell a story, it's more like a collection of abstract lines mean't to sound dark, it really doesn't do anything for me
Try telling a story next time, you have a nice vocabulary there though,

I believe I mentioned it a page or two back. I finally got around to writing a song with lyrics taken directly from the two letters the serial killer David Berkowitz (known as the son of sam) wrote. I took lines directly from those letters and just arranged them, all words are his.

"Son of Sam"
(verse 1)
I am a monster
I am the Son of Sam
Sam loves to drink blood
Kill, commands father Sam

(chorus)
Roaming the night
I live for the hunt
Programmed to kill
Yours in murder

(verse 2)
Wicked king wicker
duke of death
like a spirit in the night
darkness and death

(repeat chorus)

(interlude)
Dried blood of the dead, settled in cracks
buried behind the house, victims of his attacks
on a different wavelength than everybody else
blood and family, disciples of hell


I'll try to remember to upload it to my lastfm page tonight, so you all can hear it.

First post!

Anyways, infinitenexus I really dig the idea. However in my opinion the writing itself is just not that great. Not your fault by any means - you didn't write the words, but still I feel that much better lyrics have been written by people who aren't killers. While I could definitely see myself singing along to the chorus, it seems pretty generic given everything else that is out there.

I really like the last stanza though, and take back everything I said for that specific part. You said that you took the lines from letters and documents he wrote, maybe you could flesh out the earlier parts more like you did the last stanza? Just a thought. Unless you're going for a more straightforward sound - in which case I guess that wouldn't really work out. Again, I really like the idea!

Here are some lyrics for a song that I'm currently working on. It's part of a concept storyline so if the ending seems a bit random I feel that it fits given the surrounding story.


Torn:

I've come here for one reason only
To find a perfect world within your eyes
That blankly stare into nothingness
I close them and corrupt a life again

Her end arose by my foul hands

"Follow me into night, and leave this place you hate"

I brought her to these muddy slums
Agony and contempt screamed at me
In a haste destroyed ambition
And left her for her god

Now I see that hateful stare
Close my eyes but it's forever inside my head

In the river I drift on
Lost, seeking no air
By morning I'll be long since gone
Despair detached

An unspeakable crime
Has taken my dignity
I am shamed and tormented
Death, my release

With no family, no name, no esteem
Falling deeper my release

My final breath departs from my lips
My end arisen by my own hands
Body sinking, chest heaving
The blood that stains is now mine

As the stars rise
In the night sky and my eyes
A pair of rough hands grasps my neck
An untimely force into reality


I'm fairly inexperienced at writing lyrics, most of my songs in the past have just been made up of random lines whose syllables/vowel sounds fit the music best. This is one of my first attempts at actually writing a coherent song (I have a lot of other lyrics for other parts of the album, not close to being done by any means though) so that's about it. Any criticisms would be awesome!

Best advice I can give for writing lyrics is to study the lyrics of bands/artists known for their lyrics, even if they're outside your sub-genre. I personally really dig the first couple Arch Enemy albums for their lyrics, as for metal they cover a very broad range of topics and use a pretty nice and wide variety of vocabulary. When I'm writing lyrics I tend to frequent rhymezone.com a lot, for finding both rhyming words and synonyms. Some people never worry about rhyming; personally I like all or at least most of my lyrics to rhyme. Just my style.


Just remember that I totally forgot to upload that song to my lastfm page. I'll try to remember to do it tonight, I think hearing the lyrics is better than reading in some cases.

Hey man, thanks for the advice! I checked out that site and I like it a a lot.

Let me know when that song is uploaded, I'd like to hear it.

Fate Claims Another:

On the front line taking shots for them
This is hell will it ever end?
Blood drenched lay my best friends
Why did I survive?
I don't wish to be alive

The only man left standing
In this abondoned military operation
Left in the jungle to live
What sin did I commit to deserve this
My families at home
Thinking I'm dead
I might as well be with what's left in my head
Why did I survive?
I don't wish to be alive

One tape in hand I try to listen to it
Put it in the player and it ate my cassette
This may seem small but the silence builds
And slowly as it does my blood begins to chill
I suppose I could take my live with my weapon
For when I see my reflection my eyes are vacant
Put it to my head but by god I've been forsaken
Because the guts necessary for this feat
Are not available inside my flesh and meat

Rope hung nicely from a tree
Is this where death and I will finally meet?
I stand elevated and kick off with my feet
A shockwave of pain gives my body a greet
In the distance there is a sound of blades
From a helicopter that has come to save
I get a quick jolt of surprise
But as I kick life leaves my eyes
I could've survived
I wish to be alive

Heres something I wrote 5 minutes ago.

Carried on wings black as night,
The lady approaches,
Below the bright moon,
Evil awakes from the flesh abyss,

A queen of the night,
Her skin snow white,
Her lips black as coal
Lovely is her divine hole

Morbid beauty,
Dark insanity,
Her tainted lust,
Will be the death of me

Haunting my mind,
Drilled in my brain,
Her wings embrace me,
Her evil flows in my veins

It's called Temptress.

"Nightfall"
Author: Me.

O' black night, your song is the most beautiful of all,
A backdrop for the deeds of a man once encased in your oppressor,
Now the light has faded into the infinity behind the lunar parasite.
Within the hour they shall awaken and the skies shall change shape...
...and of this none shall bear witness, for I am shadowed by the night.

Across fields shadowed by a dusk so quickly dying,
Across meadows brightend by the tears of a newborn day,
Through forests of which I have never walked and of which no man has seen...
...Over the hills which no man has ever dared to stand atop...

RUN!!

The rain brings none but the sorrow I have kept inside,
none but the fire I had wished to hide,
Beneath these dreams I am none but the man I despise,
For eternity brings none but scorn and a man slaughtered by himself.

Nightfall take my breath, and take my eyes,
And cast them away towards these dying skies,
Deep down inside I feel the hatred rise,
The feelings I've despised that could never be contained by their lies.


This is one of the more "philosophical" songs I've written. It's far from my best. The seemingly random rhyme scheme at the end was put there simply because I was bored.

I've got a few that I might post later. Too lazy to go upstairs at the moment.

...

Ah, fuck all of those lyrics with fancy words and metaphors. It's time for some simple-but-fun deathrash! In fact, this is my first attempt at songwriting ever.

Chainsaw Zombie

Creeping from the graveyard earth.
Rotten stench of the dead berserk.
Craving for chips of human bone.
Grinding his axe on his gravestone


CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, READY TO ATTACK! CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, THE LUMBERJACK IS BACK! (x2)

Soldier of the rusty moving blade,
he can't wait for his food to be made.
Cook of necrocannibalistic cuisine,
his saw is the last many have seen.

CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, READY TO ATTACK! CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, CHAINSAW ZOMBIE, THE LUMBERJACK IS BACK! (x2)

Crunchy bone and blood splatter all over your wall,
beheaded dog in the hall.
Ripping your children's flesh just for fun,
his massacre has just begun.

CHAINSAW ZOMBIE - ATTACK!

I like it, it's got this sort of comedic value to it. I'd like to get some feedback for a song a wrote for my rock band. The song is about how the times change really, and although it has no characters and such, it's supposed to be set in the summer of '69.

Watch the World Change

Drenched in Fire from the Sky
Burning up, feverishly high
A solar tsunami from the world above
Let's make this the Summer of Love

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

The yellow leaves lay upon the ground
It seems this summer love won't last
We finally kiss and signify the end
The autumn is here, the summer is past

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

The cold of winter rears its frosty head
We try to stay warm outside and in bed
Simply cannot wait for it to end
But spring is right around the bend

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

Spring is here, the birds cheer
Flowers rise in front of our eyes
The warmth sets in, the cold goes away
I wish the springtime was here to stay

Watch the World Around You Change
Watch the seasons and people Change
Watch as your life runs its own way
Watch your life change each and every single day
(Each and every day..)
(Watch your life change each and every single day)

I like it, it's got this sort of comedic value to it. I'd like to get some feedback for a song a wrote for my rock band. The song is about how the times change really, and although it has no characters and such, it's supposed to be set in the summer of '69.

Watch the World Change

Drenched in Fire from the Sky
Burning up, feverishly high
A solar tsunami from the world above
Let's make this the Summer of Love

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

The yellow leaves lay upon the ground
It seems this summer love won't last
We finally kiss and signify the end
The autumn is here, the summer is past

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

The cold of winter rears its frosty head
We try to stay warm outside and in bed
Simply cannot wait for it to end
But spring is right around the bend

Let the seasons change
Let the sky cry fire, snow, and rain
Watch the world around you change
The life around you will keep you sane

Spring is here, the birds cheer
Flowers rise in front of our eyes
The warmth sets in, the cold goes away
I wish the springtime was here to stay

Watch the World Around You Change
Watch the seasons and people Change
Watch as your life runs its own way
Watch your life change each and every single day
(Each and every day..)
(Watch your life change each and every single day)

Axioma

I
Breathe
Your
Name

My brothers and I
Have suffered in vain
We have been born
In Sodom
But our souls remain
In Arcadia

I look out
Across a darkened sea
I look up
To a blackened sky
I scream out
To the blood raining storm
What guardian
Would wreak such havoc?

Apathy
Is my new god
Unholy and pure
I waste away
Inside these walls
To escape the path
Of
Sinners

Ostraka
Have broken me
Doubt
Has filled the cracks
I now see that
Hatred is wisdom

The
Wind
Is
The howling

Mother's tear
Blur the Father
I never
Want to hear that scream again
I never
Want to feel
That cold chill
Ever again

I have dreamt
Of a cleansing
I have starred
At the stars
And wished
For the eschaton
My dreams are filled
With blood
The mark of Gomorrah
Will damn
This place
To see
I must keep my eyes
Shut

The weight of the world
Shatters my soul
And doubt
Fills the cracks
But suddenly I realize
This desolation
Is the work
Of man

Your nails
Pierce my flesh
My skin bleeds
Bitterness
My walls are trampled
I walk out
And see
The fire

I
Breathe
Your
Name

To hold
The sands
Of time
In your
Fingers
Is to grasp
The blood
Of the fallen

Rejection
Of the world
Is for
Fools

I stood
On a foreign shore
But this night
I felt no hate
I felt wiser
Than I ever have before

I looked out
Across the same sea
As before
And
I felt no hate
I understood
What this rain
Means

Look
Around
You
What
You
See
Is
The
Face
Of
Axioma

________

thoughts?

"Our Slaughtered Children"

I loved it when we had our time alone

The good memories brought are unmatched

And I still remember while you were gone

I chopped our kids up with an axe



Our son was laying in bed

Quite content and with a stare

One swift chop split apart his head

I got him while he was lying there



Our own lovely daughter was wide awake

Singing to herself about Jesus

I could never forget that she was a mistake

As I chopped her ass to pieces



I still remember the children's funeral

Everybody hated me so

Most of the smiles were kept to a minimal

But I had one wherever I'd go

I know you still love me, dear

Even now that I'm far away

But I promise I will soon leave here

and again be free one day



Because I slaughtered our children

Because I slaughtered our blood




"Devoured"

See your corpse, covered in flies

Been a few weeks since you've died

The gods, they all love the sight

As the maggots feast to heart's delight



No longer content with human flesh

They choose which organ they like the best

Your lifeless body cannot overpower

As they dig deeper in flesh, they devour



Your face now a different form

Eyes chewed out and tendons torn

They eat the lungs that once drew breath

Before your body was a tattered mess



Devoured

Body and soul now dead

Devoured

Succumbed to a bloody death

The Lone Fir Tree

Ageless, undying solitaire
Of which not snow nor frost can deter
Alone, still in cold alpine air
What is your secret, lone mountain fir?

Except sighing in the cold wind,
Your dark needles are silent
On futility of life you so rescind
Are you forever content?

The day will come when you too will bow
Dry branches swept clean of your cones
Shedding your wooden form of now
And melting into the stones

At a time when man has long since passed
Find your windstrewn ashes, so divine
Among all Earth's creatures recast
And with their souls intertwine

I've been trying to write lyrics about the bataan death march recently, I have everything but the last verse.

verse 1
For months we have starved and fought
no bullets to defend the onslaught
from the forces of the rising sun
in this battle that could not be won
no more, we could not go on
where was our help from uncle sam?
defensive lines all overrun
it seemed our country didn't give a damn

pre chorus:
I saw
my friends
killed
stabbed if
we tried
to help

chorus:
assembly line of human killing machines
as cold and uncaring as steel
committed so many atrocities
hard to believe it was real
events so many have forgotten
a mass murder so harsh
the hell that war had begotten
the bataan death march

verse 2:
surrendered by our general
the enemy said they'd do no harm
as we began to prepare that night
we learned it was all a lie
forced to march 60 miles
food and water we were deprived
thousands stabbed, shot and killed
some men buried alive

(repeat prechorus)
interlude:
my companions lined the road
their blood stained the ground so red
pushed on, with no mercy
more than ten thousand dead

verse 3:
6 days, tortured as we walked
some shot if they even talked

And that's all I have now, I'm just trying to finish up that last verse. I'm really not good at putting things poetically, so to speak, I tend to write my lyrics what I would call "crudely". Any suggestions on word improvements, etc, would be appreciated.

Untitled

Within a troubled slumber
A whimper drags you from your dreams
soft yet urgent the mournful murmer
a whimper to singe you far alert
it could be the last cry of one
before eternal hurt
Past the doorstep mind astray
Family, friends, and strangers too
The whimper entranced all of you
Now at once concern spawns fearfully
It stops with the replacing hunger echoing
looking down the ground swallows easily
Away goes the limbs of flesh and pounds
Twisting around and down
Forcing yourself before you fall away
This pressure to force from your lungs
As it leaves tounges in unison
From the ground comes this sound
The efforts ironic to you all
Leading to this twisted call, a whimper now summons

Here's my two most recent songs. The first is black metal, the second is death metal.

Sacrificial Infant

A newborn brought forth to the altar
Its body naked and wet
Laid upon the table by the priest
And marked with the symbol of Lucifer

The infant cries for her mother
But her cries are silenced soon
A three foot dagger placed within
From the outside

Stabbing straight into the chest
The newborn's screams are silenced
The blood rushes up
And chokes the baby to death

The heart pulses with fear
As the blade twists and turns
The final cries are swept in darkness
The newborn is already dead

And lo the priest with his Satanic lust
Rips the cord out from the gut
A brand new human slaughtered
For the appetite of Satan

The fire burns bright side the temple
Where thousands of slain children lay
A monument to the suffering
In the name of Hades

Into that fire goes this lifeless corpse
Forever to rot in its bowels
Feeding the lusts of the Devil
Orgasms aplenty in her blood

Severing the Spinal Cord

Torn apart without a trace
Chainsaw grinds into your face
Body parts are strewn around
I go up and you go down

To my wall I place your head
I do not wait till you are dead
Inside your throat goes my dull knife
Slicing away at your life

Deeper and deeper I shall go
You don't know what will be the fatal blow
The carving of your precious meat
Or the blood loss from your severed feet

At last I reach the spinal cord
The slicing motions of my sword
Tear through your pathetic skin
This is a battle I shall win

Your cries and screams shall not be heard
From your severed neck hole blood does spurt
The removed head is still alive
Forever to be used as none more than a hive

Torn apart without a trace
Chainsaw grinds into your face
Body parts are strewn around
I go up and you go down

Both are realy morbid, but i like it. But i dont see a rhymesystem in the first. that wanted?


So, now mine:
Untiteled

A crufifix adorns my chest
The blood flowing out like water from the spring
I see nothing but black

Its slowly changing in me
i just feel pain
the will to survive dont exist anymore

Nothingness surrounding me
i feel only awful pain
i hear just silence

Everything fades to black
even the pain fades away
even the silence fades

Nothingness turns to all
Pain turns into Recovery
Silence turn into smooth voice

And I know
I know exactly
It was only a dream and this fuckin' alarm woke me up!

Yes there was no rhyme intended for the first one.

Some Thrash lyrics that I wrote
Death Inc.

[Verse 1]
We have a job that we pledge to do
Our job is to murder you
We have machine-gun fire on your house
We light a fire and burn it down

[Chorus]
Death Inc., Is in your town
Never ending death all around you
'cause we're paid to kill, born to assassinate.

[Verse 2]
Your life is like hell, no love, just hate
'cause the Liberty Bell came crashing down with fate
A bomb in your basement, what can you do?
We've acquired our target, that target is you

(Chorus)
(Mini-solo)

[Bridge]
We drive down the street
To look for you
We pull out our weapons
to cause you pain
Don't try to get away, it's useless
Now Die!

(Solo)

[Verse 3]
We shoot to kill and show no mercy
We will slaughter your whole family
We know where you live and we come at night
So you better stay out of our site

(Chorus) x2

[Outro]
And as you fall to the ground
We laugh as you die

Some more death metal.

Insalubrious Edible Habitation

A nation of slobs
Gluttony prevails
Obesity among the masses
Clawing for more crap

Unhealthy as our habits are
Our minds are warped by the media
Believing what the TV says
We all are fucking sheep

Believing in the God of fast food
We all gulp down the poison
Prepackaged garbage
Remade into a positive image

And the other side of the coin
Those who decry all meats
They too are victims
Of a vicious media game

Supposed animal rights groups
Denouncing all who slaughter flesh
While they do just that
And profit on the suffering they cause

Bombing scientific laboratories
Solely because of animal testing
They destroy precious data
Over simpering little apes

They are both to blame
For our current societal state
The deities of McDonald's
And the devils of Peta

Sliced Into Seven

First comes the arms
Cut off with a sword
Never again
Will he rape his whores

Next is the legs
He used them to run
After the children
That he killed for fun

His execution day
Is finally here
He is being killed
Like he killed that queer

He imitated Islam
And beheaded his wife
The same shall be done to him
Away goes his life

One slice of the blade
Removes his head
Finally at last
He is good and dead

But that is not the end for him
Cause when he butchered his mother
He split apart her chest
When he found her with her lover

The murdering rapist
Is no longer living
His severed seven parts
Eternally bleeding

Mortal


Make it you, the bitter demon inside,
Can't ever allow him to tread the light,
Mask the presence under that idea of pure,
And the hurt I wish to make more than yours

The shadow of I, the repressed promise you wish to break
To make untold sorrow be felt through dreams of the weak
Allow them to gain the control and influence they seek
Draw blood from each eyelid, finally someone will weep

Slowly it runs, a release that yet bears no significance
Pain is not felt, neither relief to release memories of sin
No word as more than just what's under the skin is revealed
Symbolic, yet it is the scars conjured that we can't ever heal

An art by two that can be considered divine
The beauty of flesh locked together, one in body, two of mind
A brief locking of ideas created in life's rising tide
Gone, and silenced pain overflowed with the red sight
Cursed to silently decay, dreaming of embracing the ever blighting day
Visions of borderless paradise, rising on wings of buried angels
Flightless forgone of freedom, self condemned mad with mind in evil
In stupour we allow ourselves to die, fulfilling that desired clique
For one moment sadness walks away, and you, your consciounce to forsake

Governmental Misrepresentation

An overbearing and Orwellian government
Supposedly keeping its lawful citizens from foreign dangers
When in reality it is anything but safe
And they refuse to tell what the true danger shall be

Lying to its own citizens of the real threats
Mass media a proxy; their mouthpiece
Filing out only what they want the public to know
Keeping the true facts locked away as long as they wish

The tattered constitution remains unmended
A network of falsehoods replacing what is actually happening
Spitting on the doctrines this country was founded on
No life, no liberty, no happiness

An overbearing and Orwellian government
Supposedly keeping its lawful citizens from foreign dangers
When in reality it is anything but safe
And they refuse to tell what the true danger shall be

The proxy papers tell of citizens having a voice
"What voice?" the people shout
Governing bastards holding control over normal man
Backed up by pigs and baby killers with assault weapons

Even if the common man can ascend to the throne of politicians
He must believe in the nonexistant man in the sky
A false God placed there by the powerful
To further their capitalistic, plutocratic theocracy

The people will never be truly free
Only manufactured freedom spread by the branches known as the news
While the God and government are in place of liberty and individuality
Society shall continue to consist of dogmatic sheep

These range from attempts at black metal, to deathgrind, angry metalcore, doom, and other stuff Opinions will be appreciated.

Song one

Wrest the carnal voice
From the talons of the chosen
Drink from the unholy chalice
Antithesis of saints
Bane of modern world
Exist as no more than a rabid carnivore
Worship none
Consume All
Devour
Pinnacle of madness
As we inhabit this pathetic void
Dreams defy nightmares define
Nothing and everything
Consume
Worship no scepter
Believe in no miracles
Exist for none
Live for all
Become the beast called man

Song two.

I am god
Feel nothing
Am everything
I am all
Infinity
Numbness
I am god
The creator
The destroyer
I am carnage
I am superman
You die for my sins
I live for yours
I am delectable
All consuming
Omniscient
Autophagic
Absolute
Gone

Song three

"as time goes on the average survival rate becomes Zero" fight club

Live by the sword
Die by the sword
This morbid act is in motion
This ghastly act in play

Get to living
Get to dying
Only constant motion
Nothing at rest

Move like blood in veins
Neurons in brain
This dystopia
Of dysphoria
Is

Live by the sword
Die by the sword
The hourglass is inverted
This clock wound
Existence is finite



Song four

All consuming kaleidoscope
Accept my presence
Allow my entrance
Permit this insolent bid for ascent
Let me in

Anticipation builds
Anxiety flows freely through
Inner high tension wires
Hopes skyrocket
Fears as well
Relive me of my ennui

I see rips in the sacred fabric
Reality is yielding
Inner vision is building

I vacation from sanity
As I welcome this infinity
In a finite world
I am none I am all
I feel
Time has no limits
Abstraction of thought patterns
Becomes
All
Absolute

Benevolent demon
Malevolent angel
Strange deity
I see ecstasy
I taste anguish
I hear All
I have entered
The end of the line
The culmination
The plus four
Relative existence
Is nothing but a
Torrent of electricity
All matter is broken down
Pure energy
Sensory immersion
Bliss in the eye of the hurricane
Peace in a forest fire
Mind is free



Song 5
Molotov cocksucker

This is the last and final straw
Push the boundaries see what happens
When it all comes crashing down

You knew what you were doing
Play with fire get burned
Repeat
Learn nothing

Theres probably a fucking moral
In this somewhere
But everything is wasted
You
You Molotov cocksucker

This epic ends badly
Don't expect to be the hero
Fight fire with fire
You get burned

The futility of it All makes me
Want to laugh
This futility of it all makes me want to
Cry
The fucking futility of it all
Makes me want to die

There was a way out
It was the opposite of the way in
You chose wrong

I guess it will be

A closed casket


Song 6

Dripping with chlorine we sit in silence
At the zen center of the hive we remain
Paragons of peace
Examples of innocence
I would love to stay in this place
In this state of bliss for an eternity
Alas
I need to leave
Life calls
I collect my tools
Douse the room in petrol
Drop a lit match as I leave
Goodbye

Hi, I'd like to share a lyric here, anyway english is not my first languge so if there is some grammar or spelling mistake please let me know!

CRUSH THE TRAITORS


We shall destroy!

[Solo]

They tried to make us fall
They were once between us all
Now we understand their goal
Attack and destroy our land

Dark minds and twisted souls
And hearts that cry below
Fake faces; masks of snow
Their blood shall run through this ground

In darkness we will raise
To fight the final war
We shall destroy ‘em all
Through wastelands, day and night
We’ll find what we were looking for:
Revenge!

A thief can be forgived
A traitor never will
We shall now take our swords and crush the traitors (X2)

[Solo]

They escaped, so far away
Trying to avoid this day
But now is our time to slay
Nobody will survive

In their souls, at great speed
Are growing the fear seeds
The same seed that now leads
The deathsquad to their homes

We’ll show no mercy now
We’re not afraid of hell
It’s just another cell
Don’t pray, you bastard dog
Your god won’t save a rat as you
Revenge!

A thief can be forgived...(X2)

[Solo]

A thief can be forgived...(X2)
Crush the traitors!

I'm 15 and I know my lyrics aren't that great but I think they're ok for what I play.

Atomic Overkill

A secret plan to end the war
Violence shall be nothing more
Our warheads are soon to be launched
They shall annhilate all populations

Five thousands tons of radiation explosives
Leave the bunkers and head into gunships
Seige the enemy from the skies
Drop the nukes and watch all innocents die

Bombs falling and thousands dying
Eyes burn out with flames
Eradication of every nation
Atmosphere swells up and exhumes the remains

Atomic Overkill!
Too much nuclear energy released
Atomic Overkill!
Mutating humans into rabid beasts

Consumned with hatred and hunger
The monsters react in demented fashion
Assaulting the survivers with death and disease
They attack at dawn or whenever they so please

Blood flows through the streets
Bodies incarcerated alive
Nuclear freeze and hypothermia
A winter of unparalled strength

Bombs falling and thousands dying
Eyes burn out with flames
Eradication of every nation
Atmosphere swells up and exhumes the remains

Atomic Overkill!
Too much nuclear energy released
Atomic Overkill!
Mutating humans into rabid beasts

The world is reduced to ash and bark
Flames and snow are one of the same
Existence, as it was, had died

A world reverted to lifelessness
All thats left is nothingness

Pouring down, emptying the black abyss of time,
Down on the those denying self-deception,
None makes sense to those next in line,
To vomit their filth into the child below,
Poisoning from birth, total control from the womb,

Eyes bound closed, thoughts gagged blind,
Filling those innocent and gullible with the venom of the lord,

The unborn seeking their purpose,
Stillborn through the arms of the preacher,
Drowning and choking, bathing in the blood of the despicable,
The chance of life slipping through their newborn grasp,

Unrelenting preaching lies spoken through perceived truth,
Filtered, twisted, all meaning lost through sculpting of the shapeless,
Purposeless souls wondering, searching for a meaning,
Evil lurking to bind their arms to the cross,

If there was ever a loving god, he is long dead,
Worms bearing the sign of the cross now take possession of this world,
A tortured paradise, a flea ridden beast of existence,
The grease and stench of life, now resides in them,

Promised eternity, by the one who was washed before thee,
A circular pattern of machine building,
A scheme with no end in sight, to program what is wrong

Slicing the flesh from the world,
Blinding one’s self with assistance to only see half,
The half which makes your whole,

Eyes bound closed, thoughts gagged blind,
Filling those innocent and gullible with the venom of the lord,

Not really great metal lyrics, but here we go.

lie!
Judged by the human population
To the switch of death
Try
To run away
And they will make you not take another breath

Breathe
While you are still alive
The mob is angry outside
Sleep
But don't you dear dreaming of escape
It's time for you to think
What will Hell be like?


What did you do
To make yourself hated by the mankind?
Did you try not to screw
It up yerself?

Why are you
The only one not sleeping at night?
Are you scared
of getting into a fight?

-----------------------------------
When one person like you
Betrays the whole world
What else can you expect?
Something is wrong
The smell of your consciousness

Your brain is melting
You should start running in circles
Doing the same mistakes multiple times
Maybe being president wasn't the smartest plan in your life?

Your life is now ruined
By your alter ego
You can't control your own country
And then you send soldiers
Where it's not really war
Do you really still think this is a game?
You should play it somewhere else

Civilizations have lost their cultures
Because your mind was never with them
You keep thinking of yourself
And when your country loses a man
Others lose millions

You said that you'd always be there
But you lied
And now it's your turn to be lied for
You suck

--------------------------------------

One day you wake up
Realizing you've got nothing left to live for
You thought your family would pay for it all
And now it's finally your own turn
Do you think you have control?
Lost it a long time ago
Aren't you going down between the lines?
To see what you just skipped
And making yourself comfortable
Is the least thing you could do

You think your life shall pay
Don't believe a word, she said
You were wrong, so damn wrong
Unfocused enough not to see
The time of your demise

Into the lungs of hell you go
One day you will show
That power is not enough
To regain all the respect you lost
When you tried
Think of your now dead family
They don't have anything

Start running
Now it's your turn
Lost and stuck in your own ways
That's the way it stays
From behind comes
The death
of justice!

And another time you wake
Eating yer own vomit to survive
Why didn't you just make
That one damn choise right?
You thought you were safe
locked up tight
In a room with nothing but you

Ran down by the fist of mass hypnosis
Can't seem to crush this
You're alone
and you die
By the death
Of justice