http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rV1ww_iBmW0

Nothing too serious, just gathered some new ideas together and threw them in this instrumental. What do you guys think? This is home-recorded and the drum machine is just for demonstration.

I like this. My critique would only be to focus more on strengthening your riffs and overall guitar playing - but you've definitely got something here, friend.

Thanks man, yeah I am still learning...

Well you certainly have potential and a sense of what it means to write a song!

Expanding on what THEMICRULAH wrote, I think the lead guitar work especially could use some tightening up. It felt really loose and kind of strained with the notes, something that will naturally improve over time.