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bloody_spike
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 19, 2012 7:19 pm 
 

Took a little while, but I finally got my first album finished. I'll go ahead and post every song here (youtube links). Let me know what y'all think. And before someone asks, I haven't, and to my knowledge can't, submit it to the archives because the only physical copies I have are Memorex CD-Rs.


01 - Sintrinsic
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fqNJ0fo5iRU

02 - Boca Del Infierno
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KkEInhhAkvw

03 - Cinemurder
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fcez7gxMgMo

04 - Crashing The Vatican
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JEW98cdbo7o

05 - Misanthropic Idol
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-8ngRJIJzIM

06 - Revenant Incineration
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aJ0FA2gqFQM

07 - Hellscraper
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WDzr3Y_fr0Q&feature=g-crec-u

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bloody_spike
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2012 11:05 am 
 

Ooookay, I guess y'all don't like it, do you?

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MalignantTyrant
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2012 1:56 pm 
 

it isn't bad at all. It isn't really anything unique or original, though (if that's what you were trying to go for). It is alright, I suppose.
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bloody_spike
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2012 3:11 pm 
 

No, wasn't really going for unique, just regular death metal. Good to know it's not bad, though. Any tips would be cool, btw. Composition, production, things to add in, things to take out, etc., for future works.

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MalignantTyrant
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2012 5:43 pm 
 

production wasn't bad, either I think. It had balls, wasn't muddy and didn't sound like Hate Eternal or Nile sludge (not always a bad thing). I can't really find anything really wrong with it other than the fact that it's quite unoriginal, which isn't even really much of a complaint.
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Syntek
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Joined: Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:14 pm
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Location: United Kingdom
PostPosted: Tue Nov 20, 2012 6:29 pm 
 

In terms of production it's every-so-slightly muddy (but fashionably so) although all the instruments are still very audiable.
What I'd work on is memorability, and also more use of the higher end of your guitar, especially for leads, and for more than just tremolo.

But other than that, it's very tight and proficient. Just not particularly interesting.

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bloody_spike
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 21, 2012 10:45 am 
 

Wow, production/guitar tone was actually my biggest worry.

So, I guess with the unoriginality, there's probably not much of a standout to anyone, huh? Like any song that seemed more well written and executed than the others?

Oh, and as far as the doing more leads thing, I've been trying, but I'm really not much of a lead player at all, so it's pretty slow going.

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