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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 8:08 pm 
 

I'm back.. again :D
I've been on a Militant Death Metal kick lately and decided to write about the aftermath of vietnam that veterans suffered.

Shattered:

Sanity
is leaving me
alone in the dark to wither
and die

entrenched in bogs
surrounded by
funeral fog
in fear of red

the loss of life
will be ignored
we'll feel the strife
we've been condemned

we're shattered
scarred forever
our minds are severed
useless endeavor

a fragile state
the flashbacks will
eviscerate
with endless dread

these exit wounds
will never heal
sleep take me soon
the sky rains lead

we're shattered
scarred forever
our minds are severed
useless endeavor

shattered
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Also, that vocal recording pic confirmed what I suspected: SLK records shirtless in a sweaty caveman-like delirium. You can almost hear the man stink in the recordings.

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kingnuuuur
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 24, 2012 6:05 pm 
 

These are probably going to be my lyrics for the death metal challenge. They might be giving away the twist though.


"Devil Never Even Lived"

Burning millenia
Or an eternity in flames
Stones cast by the same hand
On the slab of abandon
In a void sealed long ago
By cataclysmic collapse
Hidden, ever-subducting
Marked by tremendous faults
That ravaged mortality

Mortals ravaged
By tremendous faults
Towering, ever-rising
Above cataclysmic collapse
Through a void sealed long ago
By the slab of abandon
A stone cast by their hands
From eternal flames
Through burning millenia

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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 25, 2012 3:11 pm 
 

kingnuuuur wrote:
"Devil Never Even Lived"

Burning millenia
Or an eternity in flames
Stones cast by the same hand
On the slab of abandon
In a void sealed long ago
By cataclysmic collapse
Hidden, ever-subducting
Marked by tremendous faults
That ravaged mortality

Mortals ravaged
By tremendous faults
Towering, ever-rising
Above cataclysmic collapse
Through a void sealed long ago
By the slab of abandon
A stone cast by their hands
From eternal flames
Through burning millenia

It's not difficult for me to imagine Ross Dolan roaring that. Good job, man.

Here are the lyrics inspired by Chikatilo I promised some time ago:

Requiem for Gutted Children and Women

Sweet symphony of howling throats, a caress for my ears
The pain of precocious souls, my sustain and reason to live
My mind is of a murderous and savage nature, abominable
Justifying my existence through the demise of others

The ladies wail in a mixture of agonizing pain and orgasmic climax
As they are penetrated and stabbed in unison, desecrated
All the while, I bite, and I claw, and I drool, in blind ecstasy
Only when reaching my zenith of pleasure, I'll be done with you

Exterminate me you must, for my very breath is profane
Not a man, not an animal, but a monster is what I am
I will prey upon the blood of the young, until put down for good
Yet, don't you dare to think that I'll serve myself for you in a silver plate

Hunted down.....

Trapped in a cage.....

Judged by the higher powers.....

And executed.....

The beast has fallen, now left as food for the vermin
But its memory remains, a testament to mankind's lack of humanity
Carved his place in history with the cries and blood of the pure
A monolith of horror, a never ending circle of torment
The butcher's last goodbye


All I have to say is that I'm not satisfied. Well, at least I managed to avoid the use of excessive gore.
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IanThrash
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:48 pm 
 

hey this are the lyrics for my first prog thrash song
its originally in spanish so i had to translate it




en la noche bajo el manto de la obscuridad
cantos rituales irrumpen en la quietud
sombras danzan alrededor del fuego
el sacerdote dirige el rezo de la multidud


un culto siniestro ah mantenido vivo
al mas horrendo de los males
ocultando su escencia inmortal
entre las palabras de libros ancestrales


despierto ya de su eterno sueño
un ser mas alla del espacio y el tiempo
conjurado desde los abismos de universo
reclamando el mundo del cual una vez fue dueño



un culto siniestro ah mantenido vivo
al mas horrendo de los males
ocultando su escencia inmortal
entre las palabras de libros ancestrales



sangre regada por el universo
aguardan eternamente por su renacer
cuando las estrellas se alineen
desde su tumba submarina
su padre volvera a emerger
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 1:13 pm 
 

Ian, you should write your lyrics here the way they were originally meant to be written. You won't use the translation as such, so it would be a better idea for you to let us judge the actual sheet of lyrics.
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IanThrash
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:33 pm 
 

Xlxlx wrote:
Ian, you should write your lyrics here the way they were originally meant to be written. You won't use the translation as such, so it would be a better idea for you to let us judge the actual sheet of lyrics.



you are right,i edited the reply
now the lyrics are on their original lenguage :D
its a silly song but i hope you guys like it
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 11:39 pm 
 

Any Lovecraft inspired lyrics are cool in my book, so good job! :thumbsup:
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pbsisbad
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:30 am 
 

IanThrash wrote:
Xlxlx wrote:
Ian, you should write your lyrics here the way they were originally meant to be written. You won't use the translation as such, so it would be a better idea for you to let us judge the actual sheet of lyrics.



you are right,i edited the reply
now the lyrics are on their original lenguage :D
its a silly song but i hope you guys like it


Now that you have shown us what the lyrics are in Spanish, why don't you put an English translation below it?
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:42 am 
 

Why would there be a need for that? He's gonna use what he showed us, anyway.
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Poe Ohlin
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 6:44 pm 
 

Dahlia by Poe Ohlin
A portrait of beauty
Laid out on a slab
Her goodness' exposed
Ready to be torn in in two

As I cut into her tissue
It rains blood and flesh
Her organs falling out
As I remove the saw
The floor flooded from her blood

Now that she's drained of all fluid
I take a knife, and go to her face
Carving an image of horror for all time
Her face forever telling the tale

As morning starts to rise
I move her for display
Grinning as people discover her
She becoming a starlet as she dreamed
An elegant flower that I created
And an infatuation for all

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pbsisbad
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 1:05 am 
 

Xlxlx wrote:
Why would there be a need for that? He's gonna use what he showed us, anyway.

I know I could just Google Translate it, or actually read the Spanish lyrics, but it would be easier if he just wrote both.
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AIMOVORIA
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:34 pm 
 

Lyrics for my future EP by Aimovoria (extreme metal/not sure which one yet)

Astral plains I can see
Dreams encircle me
as phantoms scream
they told their
strange stories to me

Darkness surrounds me,
but I can still see the truth
the blind ones speak
but their words
are of nothingness

Nothing of the eternities
that await them in the void
nothing of the power
that reaches above them

Thousands of eyes,
stare upon the stars
as celestial ones rage!
Energy sent shifting
across the darkened plains
of mind, of spirit, of soul
the energies of chaos
are at work again.

Vibrant, sheer, powerful energy
sent throughout the universe
without a target
without a purpose
but the changes caused
can be seen easily.

The skies change to attempt,
to mimic the glory.
Planets rotate
in a strange fashion
to align with the lines
of such power,
altering their ideas.
Altering their dreams.
Linear energy streaming
just as our blood does
but no-one can see this.

Eternity stretches,
I must not forget
as those who cannot see
any of this glory
plains of mind,
plains of spirit
stretches before.
my thoughts go to waste.

My life minute,
Eternity is a thread,
I am a knot.
Exploration of these plains,
cut short.
may they never be found
by foolish hands
that do nothing
with the power before them.
that think nothing
of the stories told.

May the mind collapse.
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enigmatech
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 29, 2012 10:57 pm 
 

Here. Simple, anti-religious fluff.

"The Iris of Evolution" (by Andrew Brown)

...and thus did God speak,
His words bled silent, slipped from the lungs of man,
They flow as if a river, draining into the open hearts of the desperate.
Clinging to the remnants of souls shredded on reality,
Filtered through the seams of "science", a cancer so incurable.
Where shadows descend, pierced by the thirsting blade of sight,
Where clouds gather, born of the soul's desperation,
Born of the savior's abode.

Long ago, I watched as you bathed in the shadows of ignorance,
Which danced beneath the trees and wept upon branches,
Entranced, there you lay, soaked in the warmness of it's dark,
Incapable of free thought - bound to the fable.
A life conceived, enslaved of passion, blinded through perpetual servitude,
To the sleeping silence of the forest,
To the dreams born within it's furthest reaches.

A soul conceived of "faith", with such loathsome words,
Incapable of facing doubt's prospect, the laughing carcass of childhood...
Raised on it's flame, so blissfully in it's blinding,
An act of ceremonial binding, bled upon the words of "faith"...
O, how many shells of life, emptied upon this word...
These hollow shells now dissipate,
Dissipate with their perpetual savior.

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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:36 pm 
 

Xlxlx wrote:
It's not difficult for me to imagine Ross Dolan roaring that. Good job, man.

Here are the lyrics inspired by Chikatilo I promised some time ago:

Requiem for Gutted Children and Women (Vermillion Cries)

Sweet symphony of howling throats, a caress for my ears
The pain of precocious souls, my sustain and reason to live
My mind is of a murderous and savage nature, abominable
Justifying my existence through the demise of others

The ladies wail in a mixture of agonizing pain and orgasmic climax
As they are penetrated and stabbed in unison, desecrated
All the while, I bite, and I claw, and I drool, in blind ecstasy
Only when reaching my zenith of pleasure, I'll be done with you

Exterminate me you must, for my very breath is profane
Not a man, not an animal, but a monster is what I am
I will prey upon the blood of the young, until put down for good
Yet, don't you dare to think that I'll serve myself for you in a silver plate

Hunted down.....

Trapped in a cage.....

Judged by the higher powers.....

And executed.....

The beast has fallen, now left as food for the vermin
But it's memory remains, a testament to mankind's lack of humanity
Carved his place in history with the cries and blood of the pure
A monolith of horror, a never ending circle of torment
The butcher's last goodbye


All I have to say is that I'm not satisfied. Well, at least I managed to avoid the use of excessive gore.


These are pretty good. They're not amazing, typical death metal, but I like the use of vocabulary and the fact that, like you said, it dosen't just rely on gore gore gore. Hate the title though.
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 7:42 pm 
 

Some lyrics I wrote the other day. The song is called Madness:

Madness
Step into the gloom as it swallows light
I know you're afraid,you don't want to bleed
It rants about mutiny in your ear

We dance to living room rape scenes
Broken glass litters the floor as I groove to the static hum
Of the cracked television screen
I am the modern messiah
Free of a conscience
Mutated and reptilian

I listen to footsteps from the room upstairs
They know that I know
I lie amongst the cockroaches,it stops them from detecting my movements
I know about the government,the destroyers of all
I know about the priests,lusting for infant flesh

Confess your sins to your Gods rotting carcass
See if it makes a difference.

She sits on the covers,left filthy by spent desires
Of all things in this world,she is the most impure
Corrupted by trying to breathe inside this dead machine
She is mine

My insides burn,contorted by a mix of disgust and contamination from the kitchen sink
I heard it whispering about murder in the rain
The end of time will be scripted by our filth
We have nothing good left to die for

I shove my entire hand into her
She doesn't even blink
She sits with empty eyes and hopes these prison walls will show her where it went wrong
As I smear them with liquid death

Her death spasms like multiple nightmare orgasms
They remind me of home
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:24 pm 
 

I can feel the misanthropy in that piece, Necro. Very good job, and I'd say it would fit some desolate as hell black/doom like a glove.
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:38 pm 
 

Thanks man, I put quite a bit of time into lyrics. Imagery is very important to me.
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 8:57 pm 
 

Here's another, in a completely different style. It's called March second,2012, the end time:

Awakening to find the fridge empty
And all of the toilet paper gone
A bloody tampon left mindlessly without the basic decency of flushing
These starving animals will tear each other apart
Any second now
Lady death hums softly
Infusing the air with narcotic desire
As bodies are wheeled into collapses in the ground by the thousands
Unspeakable things are growing in places with no light
Douse it all in gasoline,my love
And get high on the fumes of this world burning to the ground
Gorge yourself on this empire of dirt crumbling tonight
Our time is almost here
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They were a band who understood music needed more explosions.

http://www.last.fm/user/TheEndTimeRiff
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:31 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
Here's another, in a completely different style. It's called March second,2012, the end time:

Awakening to find the fridge empty
And all of the toilet paper gone
A bloody tampon left mindlessly without the basic decency of flushing
These starving animals will tear each other apart
Any second now
Lady death hums softly
Infusing the air with narcotic desire
As bodies are wheeled into collapses in the ground by the thousands
Unspeakable things are growing in places with no light
Douse it all in gasoline,my love
And get high on the fumes of this world burning to the ground
Gorge yourself on this empire of dirt crumbling tonight
Our time is almost here


i lol'd
the last 4 lines are really good imo
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:35 pm 
 

aww, so you didn't think the entire thing was pure genius? :p
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:36 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
Some lyrics I wrote the other day. The song is called Madness:

Madness
Step into the gloom as it swallows light
I know you're afraid,you don't want to bleed
It rants about mutiny in your ear

We dance to living room rape scenes
Broken glass litters the floor as I groove to the static hum
Of the cracked television screen
I am the modern messiah
Free of a conscience
Mutated and reptilian

I listen to footsteps from the room upstairs
They know that I know
I lie amongst the cockroaches,it stops them from detecting my movements
I know about the government,the destroyers of all
I know about the priests,lusting for infant flesh

Confess your sins to your Gods rotting carcass
See if it makes a difference.

She sits on the covers,left filthy by spent desires
Of all things in this world,she is the most impure
Corrupted by trying to breathe inside this dead machine
She is mine

My insides burn,contorted by a mix of disgust and contamination from the kitchen sink
I heard it whispering about murder in the rain
The end of time will be scripted by our filth
We have nothing good left to die for

I shove my entire hand into her
She doesn't even blink
She sits with empty eyes and hopes these prison walls will show her where it went wrong
As I smear them with liquid death

Her death spasms like multiple nightmare orgasms
They remind me of home

i like these a lot
what genre?
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Also, that vocal recording pic confirmed what I suspected: SLK records shirtless in a sweaty caveman-like delirium. You can almost hear the man stink in the recordings.

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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:38 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
aww, so you didn't think the entire thing was pure genius? :p


oh it was xD
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Also, that vocal recording pic confirmed what I suspected: SLK records shirtless in a sweaty caveman-like delirium. You can almost hear the man stink in the recordings.

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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:38 pm 
 

Thanks man! It's like rather dissonant death metal with really doomy sections.
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:44 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
Thanks man! It's like rather dissonant death metal with really doomy sections.


which one xD
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 9:46 pm 
 

Madness, the other one does not have a song written yet.
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:02 pm 
 

is Madness recorded? i'd love to hear it
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Necroticism174
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:04 pm 
 

Friend, when I get around to it, you'll be the first to know. I'm glad you dig it.
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 02, 2012 10:09 pm 
 

Sweet.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 1:54 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
Some lyrics I wrote the other day. The song is called Madness:

Madness
Step into the gloom as it swallows light
I know you're afraid,you don't want to bleed
It rants about mutiny in your ear

We dance to living room rape scenes
Broken glass litters the floor as I groove to the static hum
Of the cracked television screen
I am the modern messiah
Free of a conscience
Mutated and reptilian

I listen to footsteps from the room upstairs
They know that I know
I lie amongst the cockroaches,it stops them from detecting my movements
I know about the government,the destroyers of all
I know about the priests,lusting for infant flesh

Confess your sins to your Gods rotting carcass
See if it makes a difference.

She sits on the covers,left filthy by spent desires
Of all things in this world,she is the most impure
Corrupted by trying to breathe inside this dead machine
She is mine

My insides burn,contorted by a mix of disgust and contamination from the kitchen sink
I heard it whispering about murder in the rain
The end of time will be scripted by our filth
We have nothing good left to die for

I shove my entire hand into her
She doesn't even blink
She sits with empty eyes and hopes these prison walls will show her where it went wrong
As I smear them with liquid death

Her death spasms like multiple nightmare orgasms
They remind me of home


This is really good, man. It has such an interesting feel to it and has a lot of angry emotions. Great stuff... I would love to here the music accompanied to this.
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Necroticism174 wrote:
Thanks man! It's like rather dissonant death metal with really doomy sections.

really awesome man i totally feel that doomy vibe in the lyrics
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:19 pm 
 

I appreciate it, you guys are awesome. I'm just waiting for that one guy who will shit all over it, and then offer cliche gore lyrics.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 2:28 pm 
 

If such an individual appears, he shall be taken care of.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 3:24 pm 
 

Another short-ish Doom one, it's called They who would trivialize the death of a Sun :


Apathy grows
As the madhouses fill
As the wolves howl the demise of hearts

Apathy grows
As family members hurt instead of nurture
As our once precious ideals disappear into the firmament

It grows and grows as we are haunted by images of society slowly growing weak at the seams
It feeds on the entropy and decay
The locust swarm and swallow up this world
Bringing with them a plague to punish us for squandering our humanity

Now something so sad has hold of our soul that we can't even cry
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 3:39 pm 
 

Necroticism174 wrote:
Another short-ish Doom one, it's called They who would trivialize the death of a Sun :


Apathy grows
As the madhouses fill
As the wolves howl the demise of hearts

Apathy grows
As family members hurt instead of nurture
As our once precious ideals disappear into the firmament

It grows and grows as we are haunted by images of society slowly growing weak at the seams
It feeds on the entropy and decay
The locust swarm and swallow up this world
Bringing with them a plague to punish us for squandering our humanity

Now something so sad has hold of our soul that we can't even cry


nice.
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 3:43 pm 
 

Profound :p
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 4:57 pm 
 

Here's one last one for now, Paper skin and Misanthropy:


Dope sick for your sympathy
Haven't eaten a proper meal in months
Convinced myself it's because my stomach hurts
It growls and churns
Digesting hatred and stale bread
Stuck in these brittle bones like a Russian doll
A girl on the metro smiles at me and I wish her comatose
Have you heard that we're all doomed?
The ghost of Stalin told me so
Through the static on my radio

Dismal anhedonia
Endless grey skies and torturous silence
An unearthly beast has hold of the very core of my soul
But it never howls
It feeds on routine and repetitive senseless conversation
Attempting to live vicariously through these soundless screams into the void

The doctors told me I was better but I told them to be Aware
To be Aware and to be weary
For behind closed doors
In dilapidated, forgotten shelters everywhere
Heroin babies with slits for eyes are attempting to cry
Can't you hear their roars carried by the wind?

In the distance,a prisoner in a suit lectures about a subject of little importance
Mass marketed audio vomit is fed to the dull and vacuous masses
Politicians ignore the impending apocalypse
They distract us with pointless wars and tax raises
And I am utterly disgusted

I am made sick by the fact that this is what it has come to
That we have squandered our potential
That we have thrown away our lives for minimum wage

So as we stand on a precipice over the gaping maw of the abyss
As the end of times looms ever forward,biblical and unstoppable
I bask in the glory of my hatred
And am glad that this diseased panorama we call existence is coming to an end
No more infomercials,no more mass murder,mo more God

All dust blowing in the wind of a world that can finally move on
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 7:13 pm 
 

Man..... How the fuck do you manage to make your lyrics sound so hateful?
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:01 pm 
 

hateful yet not forced or pathetic,the right amount of hate gore and blood to
make it sound like a chainsaw in your brain without being cliche
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 8:09 pm 
 

hey heres a little song im working on
its on spanish hope you guys like it



una enfermedad mortal
corre por las venas
de nuestra madre
arrastra como una plaga
toda forma de vida a su destruccion
calcinando en minutos
millones de años de evolucion


hijo de sus entrañas
ahora carcome con saña
el mundo que le vio nacer
sus virtudes aprovecho
para despojar a la naturaleza
ignorando que sin ella
su destino es perecer



ocaso de su existencia
victima de su inteligencia
convertido ya nuestro planeta
en un cadaver nauseabundo
buscó la solucion y descubrió
que humanidad es el nombre
de el cancer de este mundo
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PostPosted: Sat Mar 03, 2012 11:56 pm 
 

Xlxlx wrote:
Man..... How the fuck do you manage to make your lyrics sound so hateful?

I'm not sure man, when I sit to write, it's mostly dark things I end up expressing. It just comes naturally. Maybe I'm secretly a serial killer ;)
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