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Poe Ohlin
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:20 pm 
 

The Realm of White by Poe Ohlin
As I passed through the walls
And Witnessed the cels of my existence
I soon came upon colors
Swirling in the eclipse of haunted souls

As I fly in these regions
I see that of which the pallets were inspired
These colors filling my hollow eyes with light
Causing my mind to enter an opium like state

Thus I see clearly
While passing through the realms
Black Blue Grey and more
It making my bloodless heart pump again
The Pagan soul screaming out in ecstasy

As I reach the end
I see nothing through these sockets
It is blank around me
The essence of the before time
I am greeted by the guide

It's black beak explains
That I entered the realm
A realm in which nothing is the gateway to something
The color then returns
As I know now my destination
The realm of white

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metalxstorm123
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 16, 2012 9:59 pm 
 

Beyond the Illusion of Time

Time is an illusion, just a way to trick your mind. For no human can bend the sands of time. We think that time can heal or allow us not to feel. Time can does not control us, because it simply isn’t real.

Beyond the Illusion of time, the sun will fade away, beyond the illusion of time, who are we to say?

We are not immortal; we're presented life or death. Some will choose the easy way, we feel the wrath another day. It all comes back to haunt you, two deaths don’t make a life. Fate does not allow us, but sometimes it just might.

Beyond the Illusion of time, the sun will fade away, beyond the illusion of time, who are we to say?
If we all live for tomorrow, what if we die today? Time has a way of changing things, who are we to say?

Beyond the Illusion of time, the sun will fade away, beyond the illusion of time, who are we to say?
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Poe Ohlin
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 17, 2012 2:22 pm 
 

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Nice song dude. The only gripe I'd say is that it says Beyond the Illusion of Time a lot. Other then that it's cool.

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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2012 11:22 pm 
 

hello again ^^
i decided to expirement with my lyrics again (oh god..) and attempted to write a song in Black Speech. i wanna start a solo project under my psuedonym (Dagrigoth) one of these days and have it sound like kinda like Roots. militant, tribal, chanty. and have it all in orcish >:D;;
it's damn hard to write in orcish/black speech tho xD;;

Mirdautas vras:

Mirdautas vras(it is a good day to kill)
Mabaj bot ob armauk(i have a world full of enemies)
Vrasubatburuk ug (we will kill all the men..)
butharubatgruiuk(..and sodomize all the women)

Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)

Sulmog the shire (raid the shire)
Zorratug Undur hobbituluk (eviscerate all those fat hobbits)
Ambor mabas lufut (liquor after war)
Pargijakun Pros Vrasug gruiuk (bloodstained blade killing the women)

Mirdautas vras(it is a good day to kill)

Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
Rramab, Vrasan, Lind Papig!(rape, kill, eat raw)
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Ilwhyan
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 9:19 am 
 

Why does it have to be the exact same song title as the Summoning song?

Writing a song in the black speech is cool and if you really know the language, well, though you're indubitably a massive nerd, it's laudable in a way. However, those lyrics are shit. Total shit. Sorry.

Sulmog the shire (raid the shire), really?
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 2:42 pm 
 

Ilwhyan wrote:
Why does it have to be the exact same song title as the Summoning song?

Writing a song in the black speech is cool and if you really know the language, well, though you're indubitably a massive nerd, it's laudable in a way. However, those lyrics are shit. Total shit. Sorry.

Sulmog the shire (raid the shire), really?


stfu i needed to put something there xDDD

bahahaha i know they definitely are completly horrid
i have a tendency to get, and every so often attempt to act upon, really retarded ideas. ADHD and whatnot. i usually wake up the next day as i am in this case, and end up laughing at my own idiocy.
in a nutshell; i get bored. see an orc or some shit on tumblr and a lightbulb goes off in my inner fucktard.
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Ilwhyan
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:13 pm 
 

Nothing wrong with the idea, your execution was merely piss-poor. I aknowledge the increaded difficulty of pursuing one's inspiration and goals for remarkable results when suffering from mental conditions, but it doesn't set the bar any lower. If you really do have the motivation to learn the black speech, go ahead and write lyrics using the language, but trying your damnest to write something in a language you have the barest grasp of, if even that, is not worthwhile.
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 22, 2012 4:30 pm 
 

Ilwhyan wrote:
Nothing wrong with the idea, your execution was merely piss-poor. I aknowledge the increaded difficulty of pursuing one's inspiration and goals for remarkable results when suffering from mental conditions, but it doesn't set the bar any lower. If you really do have the motivation to learn the black speech, go ahead and write lyrics using the language, but trying your damnest to write something in a language you have the barest grasp of, if even that, is not worthwhile.


heh goodpoint. i should rethink my ideas before attempting something i probably cant do
for example; my senior project, i decided (too late to turn back now), that i'm going to write, record, and sell a death metal album.
i've got almost no idea what i'm doing.
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Also, that vocal recording pic confirmed what I suspected: SLK records shirtless in a sweaty caveman-like delirium. You can almost hear the man stink in the recordings.

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Blasphemr
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 8:02 pm 
 

Hahaha, some of these posts reminded me of some lyrics me and a couple of my friends scrawled on a bit of paper we managed to find while polishing off some Pilsner one night. I'll leave it un-translated just for added effect, hahahah.

KrakHead Sally

Crack head Sallaaaaayyy
She lookin fo some, Rock
Crack Head sallaaaaaayyy
Hush, No time to talk

Down on her knees
Do what you pleez
Slip her the fist
If you get my gist

Crack head sally
Struttin out her stuff
Crack head Sally
Can't get enough

Fo just a quarter gram
You can be her Man
If you got a gun, You'll need more protection
Cause crack Head Sally, got infections

This is what you get after 36 beers and a night of Dr. Rockzo and Metalocalypse. Enjoy.
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Suffersystem
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 24, 2012 11:43 pm 
 

Blasphemr wrote:
Hahaha, some of these posts reminded me of some lyrics me and a couple of my friends scrawled on a bit of paper we managed to find while polishing off some Pilsner one night. I'll leave it un-translated just for added effect, hahahah.

KrakHead Sally

Crack head Sallaaaaayyy
She lookin fo some, Rock
Crack Head sallaaaaaayyy
Hush, No time to talk

Down on her knees
Do what you pleez
Slip her the fist
If you get my gist

Crack head sally
Struttin out her stuff
Crack head Sally
Can't get enough

Fo just a quarter gram
You can be her Man
If you got a gun, You'll need more protection
Cause crack Head Sally, got infections

This is what you get after 36 beers and a night of Dr. Rockzo and Metalocalypse. Enjoy.


bahajahahahahhahaha excellent
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Poe Ohlin
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 25, 2012 10:41 pm 
 

CrushFuck by Poe Ohlin
I throw the bitch down on the ground
Rip her clothing off
And burn the underwear
I shove my fist down her throat
So her screams don't make my ears bleed

I undo my pants
Coming out like a sword unsheathed
I force her gates to open
Before ramming myself into that sweet c***

Pounding against you
As you cry out
I slam onto you
Ripping to the back and destroying your uterus

I rip your suckle
And flood your body
I slam myself again
Crushing your body

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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2012 7:10 pm 
 

Blasphemr wrote:
Hahaha, some of these posts reminded me of some lyrics me and a couple of my friends scrawled on a bit of paper we managed to find while polishing off some Pilsner one night. I'll leave it un-translated just for added effect, hahahah.

KrakHead Sally

Crack head Sallaaaaayyy
She lookin fo some, Rock
Crack Head sallaaaaaayyy
Hush, No time to talk

Down on her knees
Do what you pleez
Slip her the fist
If you get my gist

Crack head sally
Struttin out her stuff
Crack head Sally
Can't get enough

Fo just a quarter gram
You can be her Man
If you got a gun, You'll need more protection
Cause crack Head Sally, got infections

This is what you get after 36 beers and a night of Dr. Rockzo and Metalocalypse. Enjoy.

Seems it would fit some S.O.D. styled crossover like a glove.
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Blasphemr
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 30, 2012 7:25 pm 
 

@Xlxlx: Yeah I could definitely see that, though I'm pretty sure no one would want to write a song about Krakhead Sally. I could imagine that some of the members here on MA wouldn't mind picking up the "challenge" thoughh, just for the laughs.

Some more lyrics I had to write as an easy project for school, these are a bit more serious, but not really.

Impending Holocaust

Emergence of the War Machine of the Unholy Death Regime
Tyrants meet and make their plan
To conquer all the land they can
From the mountains to the sea
No one will again be free
Imposing their laws on everyone
The master plan has just begun

Capital Punishment! Is the power to their kingdom
Fear the words, "Si vis pacem, Para bellum"
The future of Mankind is lost,
To the Impending Holocaust

Missiles falling all the time
In a campaign for all to die
Tanks annihilate our towns
As soldiers come to shoot us down
Our culture, eradicated
Aggressor ways, initiated


That's all I got so far, tell me what you think. Good, Bad, Could be better... It all sounds good to my ear.
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Tue Jan 31, 2012 11:06 am 
 

Pretty standard thrash metal lyrics you got there, buddy. Not bad, but they could use a little more depth. Also, the first line is unnecessarily long.

I'm currently working in some lyrics inspired by Andrei Chikatilo (look him up, as I promise you it's pretty gross stuff). Will post them when finished.
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Zodijackyl
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 02, 2012 11:23 pm 
 

Advice to everyone who has posted lyrics on this page:

Your choice of words and habits of forcing rhymes make your awful choice of subjects sound like angsty pre-teen poetry. Rape and holocaust themes will never do your writing any favors, the subjects are dumb and immature, and gimmicky lyrics get old really quickly. You can set the bar for creativity higher.

Try to bring out details and interesting elements in something a bit more passive, or even something inane. Try to get a rhythm to your written words without rhyming. Write something similar to the style of a writer that you're not really interested in without being mocking or having an obnoxious tone to it.

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Demoralisation
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 8:46 am 
 

Zodijackyl wrote:
Rape and holocaust themes will never do your writing any favors, the subjects are dumb and immature, and gimmicky lyrics get old really quickly.


Second that.I too wonder which kind of person writes about those topics or even means it.Of course you can be extreme and nevertheless write good lyrics,like Herr Warcrimer/People hater from Infernal War,Iperyt and Voidhanger shows,without seeming to be just another dumbass like all the mentally retarded Grindcore or Brutal Death Metal morons.
On the other hand I don't expect typical Metal lyrics to be as deep as the ones from Blut aus Nord or Deathspell Omega.

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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 9:13 am 
 

Zodijackyl, I second your post, but cut the guys some slack. Not everyone can be bloody Dan Greening or Midnight.
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Ilwhyan
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:15 pm 
 

Xlxlx wrote:
Zodijackyl, I second your post, but cut the guys some slack. Not everyone can be bloody Dan Greening or Midnight.

I've taken you for a quality poster, however, that's a nigh idiotic reductio ad absurdum. Not everyone has to be Dan Greening to be able to write quality lyrics, and not everyone with no talent at all must be "given slack" if they feel the need to share their lyric abominations. Shitty effortless productions of talentless minds must be scorned openly or completely ignored (feel free to do likewise to mine, if you feel that they deserve it).

Incidentally, I'd appreciate some feedback on my lyrics for the metal-archives songwriting contest this February. It's quite tongue-in-cheek and hardly embraces untypical, intellectual themes.

What is this craven reluctance
Aversion to fruits of the greatest pleasure
Though I object not to self-defence
I answer to violence likewise
Are you not excited, as I am
By the relentless lechery

The succulent flesh oozes its nectars...
Inhumanly arousing scent, stench...
The gentle, invigorating
Ever instigating, excruciating
Caress of both your nether orifices
The filthiness of the act
Only further amplifies my lust

Erotic hunger of all five senses
And, seemingly, infinitely
A state of all-encompassing extacy
Why do you not lust as I do?

You shall be the fourth of the ten
The innocent lay tainted, ravaged,
Yet not broken, for further use
I preach of the paths of high pleasure
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 5:49 pm 
 

Yeah, you're right Ilwhyan, my statement was very fallacious and I didn't really put thought into it before posting. Should've done otherwise.

Now, about your lyrics; I'd say that they are very well thought and interesting to read, especially considering the subject matter. You pulled off something quite difficult there, mate.

PS: The lyrics about Chikatilo are proving to be a complete bitch, because I'm trying to write something at least mildly sophisticated about an extremely gross subject (again, like Greening). Only when I'm satisfied with them will I post them.
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kingnuuuur
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 6:07 pm 
 

What the hell, I'll post some of my scribbles which I might use someday. Here goes:

"The Hell We Fear"

Brittle existence
A marble amongst mountains
And myriad more mountains
Enormous, boundless
Ruled only by time
They all break
And collapse
And rain rocks
And boulders beneath them
Crushing marbles
Crushing themselves
Crushing everything
Interminably

Feeble things
Once mountains
Now neither pebbles
Nor dust nor particles
Yet still opposing
Pushing, battling
Agglomerating
For the conquest of being
For nothing but the right
To be crushed again

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Ilwhyan
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 6:11 pm 
 

Cool metaphor, man. In terms of form and theme reminded me of Pentecost III -era Anathema and such.
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 03, 2012 6:12 pm 
 

kingnuuuur wrote:
"The Hell We Fear"

Brittle existence
A marble amongst mountains
And myriad more mountains
Enormous, boundless
Ruled only by time
They all break
And collapse
And rain rocks
And boulders beneath them
Crushing marbles
Crushing themselves
Crushing everything
Interminably

Feeble things
Once mountains
Now neither pebbles
Nor dust nor particles
Yet still opposing
Pushing, battling
Agglomerating
For the conquest of being
For nothing but the right
To be crushed again

Don't ask me why, but I was giggling the entire time while reading this.
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PhilosophicalFrog
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 05, 2012 7:24 pm 
 

These are the lyrics I will no doubt use for the songwriting challenge...the music reflect accordingly.

No rhymes, no frills, no gimmicks. The music is chaotic death metal/doom sections. Screamed vocals alternate with growls.

Masked homeless persona, chained
slave response to post-mod interpretation.
Stationed in grave response to mass consumed
emotions that drive, more or less, the forces
of men and women.

Sickly smile covers
the bloody gums and lack of pairs of
eyes. Only one is present, only one
is needed. Uses lack of depth to
gauge whether or not it would be
better to merely speak the words of God
then write them in cryptanalytical fashion.

There is a puzzle here, presented in
obvious fashion,

He sighs,

As unraveling
bits of string to reveal muscle sinew and
the white bleached surface of bone.
Locked in a room with no doors, no
windows, cannot leave the closeted
cloistered and cracked cave in of
a human skull without being tormented
in fragments.

Cenotaph wanderer.
Great Melmoth and simple staff holder.
The boy wakes from dreams to find his
tooth broken, a tongue down his throat,
she has found him once again and he
submits to her striked lancers.
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Ilwhyan
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:48 am 
 

Reads as a deranged version of earlier Omnium Gatherum lyrics. I'll be frank: I didn't understand at all what you were trying to say with that.
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Xlxlx
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 12:21 pm 
 

Ilwhyan wrote:
Reads as a deranged version of earlier Omnium Gatherum lyrics. I'll be frank: I didn't understand at all what you were trying to say with that.

Me neither. It would be cool if the lyrics were a little bit less cryptic.
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garthmargengi
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 12:51 pm 
 

Though I can follow a line and depictions I have to agree that I'm kinda at a loss here, don't really know for sure what it is about, quite ambiguous.
Nonetheless, gotta say I like it.

Oh well, since I'm already here, here's another piece of lyrics for that demo I'm doing, too late to correct, but any suggestions and criticism will be appreciated and taken in for future reference.

Spoiler: show
THE ROTTEN WASTE

A waning moon brings forth a dewless dawn
Creep the rays of light throughout the sky
Reaching the clouds and stars with it's grasp
Dims the night, celestial passerby

The roar of an ancient god, flaming beyond
mounds and spires and ruins of old
Summons waves of blistering heat,
sears thru the landscape as ancient forebode

Reek the weak that lurk in the dark
Feeble the creatures that hide from the light

Colour and splendour, disease and decaying,
Shrieking and ringing and crawling insane,
Rabbles exotic to stranger gods praying,
Jumbles of odour that stifle the brain.*


Ruins forgotten and wreckage and bane
Echoes of voices that hide in the shades

Ruins forgotten and wreckage and bane
In the rotten waste only the charioteer rides

*Yeah, that part ain't mine, it's quoted from Lovecraft
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 06, 2012 10:28 pm 
 

I'll be honest, that was the fifth of six in a lyrical series :lol:.

Perhaps I should start with the first one, and we can build it up. Those are just the lyrics that immediately matched my musical vision. However, when I get home, I'll post the series up, from the ground up.

Also, not all the lyrics are "said" in my songs, borrowing a bit from Cryptopsy here, where there is a story present in the lyrics but not necessarily in the vocal delivery, as I don't think all words need to be present to create an artistic vision.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 07, 2012 1:36 am 
 

Blasphemr wrote:
Hahaha, some of these posts reminded me of some lyrics me and a couple of my friends scrawled on a bit of paper we managed to find while polishing off some Pilsner one night. I'll leave it un-translated just for added effect, hahahah.

KrakHead Sally

Crack head Sallaaaaayyy
She lookin fo some, Rock
Crack Head sallaaaaaayyy
Hush, No time to talk

Down on her knees
Do what you pleez
Slip her the fist
If you get my gist

Crack head sally
Struttin out her stuff
Crack head Sally
Can't get enough

Fo just a quarter gram
You can be her Man
If you got a gun, You'll need more protection
Cause crack Head Sally, got infections

This is what you get after 36 beers and a night of Dr. Rockzo and Metalocalypse. Enjoy.

I'M DR. ROCKZO, THE ROCK'N'ROLL CLOWN! I DO COCAINE!

Just kidding, but that does sound like a Zazz Blammymatazz song.
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pbsisbad
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PostPosted: Wed Feb 08, 2012 1:06 am 
 

Sorry for the double post, but I got bored and needed to write some lyrics.

The song is called "All in Vain." It is Progressive Death Metal. It is mostly screamed with a melodeath scream, some death growls, and cleans in the chorus. The first chorus is the same as the others, so follow that one as a guide. There is one stanza which is spoken lightly, which is denoted with "[Spoken]" above it. Everything else is screamed or death growled, whichever is appropriate.

It's about a guy who witnesses a murder, becomes traumatized, goes insane, and kills the murderer. Let me know what you think.

Pbsisbad wrote:
Death is instant
But tortured you will be
I'll make sure it's fun!
For!
ME!

Nothing can ever
Reconcile you for
This mortal sin you
Conjured upon me!

And now I will conjure on you
The torturous pain of my wrath
We start with your legs.
It will be a bloodbath!

[Cleans]
And I will let out my insanity
[Screams]
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
[Cleans]
And I will feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

[Yell]
Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
[Scream]
Bloody stumps!

[Cleans]
Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered!

And what did you do to deserve this?
You mutter over your blood-flooded throat
And what happened to me to think of this?
Well I'm more traumatized than you!

And it's all your fault!

You fucked me over some time ago!
You are the one who took her away!
And now she is gone!
In the same place where you will soon be!

And I will let out my insanity
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
And I will can feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
Bloody stumps!

Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered

They didn't realize (They didn't realize)
I saw it with my eyes (I saw it with my eyes)
Your face soaked in red (Your face in red!)
And she was dead and on the walls!

Your petty cash bailed
You out that night
Connections made you innocent!
But no amount of anything
Will keep you from being
Devoured alive tonight!

Run!
Run!
I give you one chance!
Headstart! Gunshot!
GO!
But I'll be back soon
Sheathed carving knife and
Rifle ready to shoot!

And I will let out my insanity
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
And I will can feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
Bloody stumps!

Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered!

The deed is complete
A neck shot all I needed.
Disabled, ready to kill
Not yet.

I cut into your face
You jerk around like a fucking pig on a hook!
Where your nose was is blood!
Your suffering climaxes now!

All the shit you've done
Comes back around tonight!
Monsterous violence!
Culminates in victory!

And slowly
Cold bladed knife
Into your neck
Ending your life!

[Spoken]
And now I lick the blood, which drips from your vein.
The corpse is prepared, for consumption again.
Regret set's in, it's all in vain.

Regret set's in
It's all in vain!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

What the fuck have I done!
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 12:34 am 
 

pbsisbad wrote:
Sorry for the double post, but I got bored and needed to write some lyrics.

The song is called "All in Vain." It is Progressive Death Metal. It is mostly screamed with a melodeath scream, some death growls, and cleans in the chorus. The first chorus is the same as the others, so follow that one as a guide. There is one stanza which is spoken lightly, which is denoted with "[Spoken]" above it. Everything else is screamed or death growled, whichever is appropriate.

It's about a guy who witnesses a murder, becomes traumatized, goes insane, and kills the murderer. Let me know what you think.

Pbsisbad wrote:
Death is instant
But tortured you will be
I'll make sure it's fun!
For!
ME!

Nothing can ever
Reconcile you for
This mortal sin you
Conjured upon me!

And now I will conjure on you
The torturous pain of my wrath
We start with your legs.
It will be a bloodbath!

[Cleans]
And I will let out my insanity
[Screams]
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
[Cleans]
And I will feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

[Yell]
Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
[Scream]
Bloody stumps!

[Cleans]
Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered!

And what did you do to deserve this?
You mutter over your blood-flooded throat
And what happened to me to think of this?
Well I'm more traumatized than you!

And it's all your fault!

You fucked me over some time ago!
You are the one who took her away!
And now she is gone!
In the same place where you will soon be!

And I will let out my insanity
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
And I will can feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
Bloody stumps!

Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered

They didn't realize (They didn't realize)
I saw it with my eyes (I saw it with my eyes)
Your face soaked in red (Your face in red!)
And she was dead and on the walls!

Your petty cash bailed
You out that night
Connections made you innocent!
But no amount of anything
Will keep you from being
Devoured alive tonight!

Run!
Run!
I give you one chance!
Headstart! Gunshot!
GO!
But I'll be back soon
Sheathed carving knife and
Rifle ready to shoot!

And I will let out my insanity
(My undiagnosed rage!)
(My pent up emotions!)
And I will can feast upon your insides
Remembering this victory!

Don't look back!
Just run!
On your
Bloody stumps!

Seeing you die is a carnal pleasure
Worth all the waiting and rotting in prison.
At least I won't be worm's meal.
At least I wasn't tortured and dismembered!

The deed is complete
A neck shot all I needed.
Disabled, ready to kill
Not yet.

I cut into your face
You jerk around like a fucking pig on a hook!
Where your nose was is blood!
Your suffering climaxes now!

All the shit you've done
Comes back around tonight!
Monsterous violence!
Culminates in victory!

And slowly
Cold bladed knife
Into your neck
Ending your life!

[Spoken]
And now I lick the blood, which drips from your vein.
The corpse is prepared, for consumption again.
Regret set's in, it's all in vain.

Regret set's in
It's all in vain!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
It's all in vain!
Not again!

What the fuck have I done!


I like how you made the murderer have a motive instead of it just being more sadism. Works as far as gore lyrics go. The only thing I would say is work on rhythm. Otherwise, not bad. I'll post something of my own as soon as I write something that isn't total shit. And when I stop being so self-critical about my writing.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 1:49 am 
 

Alright, I wrote up some more lyrics! The song is called "Flatlined." This song is a progressive melodic death metal song again, but not just "progressive" as in technical, but in the "progression" sense of the word. It's like a Melodic death metal "One" in that sense.

The syntax may be confusing. The song starts with a lone acoustic guitar. In the first three verses, everything before the triple dot is sung solemnly at a normal tempo. Then there is a pause of about a third of second. The single word is enunciated slowly, and then the next line is sung faster than that, but slower than the line before it. The next line is sung at the same speed as the first with no pauses. The pre-chorus builds into an aggressive singing voice, which continues into the chorus. The last line of the third verse is the turning point in the song. Everything is normal until the words "that it was ME," which progress quickly into a melodeath scream, holding "ME" for a few seconds. At this point, all the other instruments kick in (electrics, bass, drums, atmospheric synths). The next stanza is melodeath screams and death growls. In the next stanza, "I'm sorry!" is screamed as loud as possible, and the next line is quickly death-growled. The first two lines of each stanza in the next chorus are screamed, and the other two are sung in the same way as the first. On "IN/SIDE," hold that for two measures. After this, it goes into a breakdown (blasphemy!). The next eight lines are screamed and death growled, alternatively. Hold "OUT" for as long as possible, as a ripping two minute solo and speedy riffing outro finish it off.

If you don't understand or want to read that, that's okay, as this is a lyrics thread.
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I've tried for years to be impartial...but
It didn't work.
I tried four years ago to live a lie
The tears I cried for that girl... 'cause
She left me
The lies she lied for my sanity.

And then she left me
She left a void in my soul
And then she left me
She left a void in my soul

Unhealed, Unloved
Unholy, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined inside.

Unhealed, Unloved
Unholy, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined inside.

I'just wanted to please her...make
Life her Heaven
I'just want her to be happy and alive. (Happy and alive)
But now she's gone because she...went
With someone else.
But now she's gone forever from my life.

And then she left me
She left a void in my soul
And then she left me
She left a void in my soul

Unhealed, Unloved
Unholy, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined inside.

Unhealed, Unloved
Unholy, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined inside.

And how my life has changed...since
Four years ago
And how my life has changed since I left them all
All of my friends and fam'ly, they...Never
Saw it coming.
Her parents were shocked when they learned that it was ME.

I left her in the ditch!
I confess to it all!
Blind jealously and hate!
Made me take her away!

I'm sorry!
I wish I could back every moment of that day!
I'm sorry!
I wish it were me, I wish it were me!
I'm sorry!
I wish I could back every moment of that day!
I'm so sorry!
I wish it were me, I wish it were me!

Unhealed, Unloved
Unholy, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined inside.

Unhealed, Unholy
Unloved, Overwhelmed
Don't try to heal me 'cause
I've already flatlined
IN
SIDE

It's been four years!
Four years too long!
I'm turning myself in!
As a bag of bones!
It's time for me to suffer!
It's time for me to cry!
Suicide is my only way out!
Shot to the face is my only way!

OUT!
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 4:41 pm 
 

Two new songs I wrote. One I wrote about a friend from Youtube who hasn't been on in a while, and it appears as if she committed suicide. So the song reflects that.

Deathlike Silence
As night falls on the village
Fear starts to fester in the hearts of man
They lock their doors for safe keeping
Hoping that it doesn't strike

It crawls from the pit of destruction
To feast on the flesh of humans
It's mouth grinning like death
A morbid stench surrounding it

This plague moves from the forest to the village
Black and gold eyes scanning for the perfect meal
The sockets then lock onto a godly girl
Her blood stopping as the creature pounces

It lands on the divine body of the female
The girl's mouth snaps open to scream
This monster's claw forcing it to close
The beast then starts eating her away

And throughout the village
The unholy shriek of the girl pierced their ears
But the noise which follows is far worse
That noise being nothing but silence......
......Deathlike silence

Entranced Affection
Enthralled by a macabre life
She lives her by the blade
Drowning herself in the depths of depression
All in the name of pleasure

She emulates her idol
Wanting to become him
Even if it ends her
To be him is her only goal

Those close to her try to stop it
Her lover offering anything if she stays
But these mean nothing
As her path is set in stone

The destruction begins
Three snips and a click
Leaving a hole in the hearts and minds
And the head and body of loved ones

Her dream has occurred
She went as he did
They met in the other world
And live in the darkness of death

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 5:43 pm 
 

pbsisbad...

You ought to grow up a little and then try again with the lyrics. I'm absolutely serious. If you think those are good, you should probably read some more lyrics and develop your writing. Those murder lyrics were almost tolerable, that "it's time for me to cry!" crap was unbearable.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 7:15 pm 
 

Ilwhyan wrote:
pbsisbad...

You ought to grow up a little and then try again with the lyrics. I'm absolutely serious. If you think those are good, you should probably read some more lyrics and develop your writing. Those murder lyrics were almost tolerable, that "it's time for me to cry!" crap was unbearable.


Well I'm happy that you noticed the intentional immaturity and blatant emotion I laced into the lyrics. First of all, I am 15, so I decided to capitalize on the immaturity by writing the song from the point of view of a troubled teen. The immaturity can be interpreted as a quick scrawled suicide note from a kid who wants to turn himself in "as a bag of bones."

The last stanza is terrible. It's supposed to be terrible. It is scrawled on the paper, maybe even as the kid may be slitting his wrists. This is an emotional song.

I had a feeling some people wouldn't like it, and understandably so. With that, I will take a break for a few weeks, read some lyrics, maybe improve upon my lyrical maturity, as I see that this is an ongoing problem. I'm sorry if this looks like damage control, but I feel that I needed to clarify some criticisms.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 7:20 pm 
 

Writing as a fifteen year old would write is a terrible idea. Stretch your linguistic skills to their limit as you write your verse.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 9:21 pm 
 

I see your point. It's just that I am 15.
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 11:35 pm 
 

I'M BACK MOTHERFUCKERS.
k so i decided to write all(or most) my lyrics for Aghanim (a solo death metal project im doing for my sr project) about zelda n shit.
so i was all hmm whats fuckin brutal in zelda? welllll the deku tree having a giant fucking armored spider queen killing him slowing from the inside out is fuckin brutal.. yeah lets do that.
and this is what my efforts produced;

"The Parasite"
I can’t stop it
I can’t fight it
Coursing through me,
This war is one-sided

Please free me
I can’t see me
I’ll be dead soon
If it doesn’t leave me.

RRRRRRRUUUUUUGGHHHHHHHHHHH I’M INFECTED

Psychologic
Misanthropic
When hate takes over,
Nothing will be left

The rejection,
The dejection,
end me now
I can’t stand my reflection.

Parasite!!! Inside!!!
Of my brain, infecting my mind!!!
Parasite!!! Inside!!!
Of my brain, enslaved to it’s lies!!!

The spider queen
Within me
Clawing my retinas
And making them bleed

I can’t breath now
I can’t think now
All that’s left
Is my mental Dachau

Parasite!!! Inside!!!
Of my brain, infecting my mind!!!
Parasite!!! Inside!!!
Of my brain, enslaved to it’s lies!!!

RRRRRRRUUUUUUUGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH I’M INFECTED
____________

whatdya think?
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:43 am 
 

Suffersystem wrote:
k so i decided to write all(or most) my lyrics for Aghanim (a solo death metal project im doing for my sr project) about zelda n shit.


I hate it when people write about video games. But that doesn't mean I don't like these lyrics! They seem to fit your description, brutal death metal. I don't like the first line of the second stanza. It's too short. (I death-growled this to myself in a number of speeds, so this is where I derive my criticisms.) I saw a general scheme like this:
4 syllables
4 syllables
4 syllables
7 syllables

5th stanza, 3rd line was too short.

I am really digging the chrorus. Played at a slightly slower speed than the rest of the song, this would be really brutal.

7th stanza, 2nd line is too short.

I know that 8th stanza 3rd line is too short, but leave it that way. It fits.

All in all, it's a solid composition about something terrible to write about. I implore that once this project is finished you seek different lyrical themes. I think you need to be careful about the amount of syllables per line, because they threw me for a loop when I growled it out. As a side note, I would growl this really fast. Like, as quickly as you could manage. Good luck with your band.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 14, 2012 1:54 am 
 

pbsisbad wrote:
Suffersystem wrote:
k so i decided to write all(or most) my lyrics for Aghanim (a solo death metal project im doing for my sr project) about zelda n shit.


I hate it when people write about video games. But that doesn't mean I don't like these lyrics! They seem to fit your description, brutal death metal. I don't like the first line of the second stanza. It's too short. (I death-growled this to myself in a number of speeds, so this is where I derive my criticisms.) I saw a general scheme like this:
4 syllables
4 syllables
4 syllables
7 syllables

5th stanza, 3rd line was too short.

I am really digging the chrorus. Played at a slightly slower speed than the rest of the song, this would be really brutal.

7th stanza, 2nd line is too short.

I know that 8th stanza 3rd line is too short, but leave it that way. It fits.

All in all, it's a solid composition about something terrible to write about. I implore that once this project is finished you seek different lyrical themes. I think you need to be careful about the amount of syllables per line, because they threw me for a loop when I growled it out. As a side note, I would growl this really fast. Like, as quickly as you could manage. Good luck with your band.


thanks for the critique man. this was actually meant to be mid-paced old-school death metal. for the versus, the closest thing i can think of would be "gasping for air" by Jungle rot and the chorus (i just remembered where i got that kind of rythm from it was bugging the shitttt out of me) is kinda like that of "rotted body landslide" by CC.
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 17, 2012 4:09 pm 
 

Inside The Diamond

Avoiding all the dangers
To find my way to the center
I must find the chamber
Filled with riches that I need

Through the flames and fires
I must venture to my destination
The diamonds are things to aspire
They will be mine in this adventure

Come on!

(Musical part)

I've been through many lands
Won all the tasks against me
Soon, those will be in my hands
I shall succeed in my destiny

Through mazes, traps and labyrinths
I venture into the unknown
Never know the terror of they bring
Solving puzzles to the path
To be shown

I must proceed forward
Never going to give up
All the diamonds shall be MINE!!!

(Guitar Solo 1)

Finally...
I have reached the center of the cave
For all the passions I have to give

Silence...
I walk so slow
To the depth of these rocks

Freezing...
The place is so cold

So, I Sail down a river
And here I approach to the chamber of diamonds

-------------------

Splendor... glamor...
such a magnificent scene
Many diamonds of all sorts of colors
Of red, blue, yellow, and green

A chamber as big as a field
Field of diamonds and rocks
More than the eye could meet
Wherever I may look
Shining from all over the place
In awe, the astonishment on my face
Such a cavern swallowed by land
Hidden from the world
A majestic sight of grand
That no one has told

In the center of the room
There's a huge rock
That is filled of the best diamonds
My greed within had started to play

As a thief, I started to pick one by one
They are all going to be mine
My thirst of stealing can't be undone
For everyone I take I have my smile
They all shall be mine
Hahaha!

(Guitar Solo 2)

A hum from out of nowhere
A voice in the room
So pleasant for me to hear
For I feel not alone
I reached back to the center of the cave
Louder the voices and humming became
And feels like it is coming from inside the rock
My greed kicked again for the diamonds around I took
Suddenly, a light is cracking from within
Now, holding my breath so still
Until it opens all so wide
As all it had crumbled down

Now, that it is all open
I see...
I see...
The biggest diamond I had ever seen
My eyes could never believe
Such beauty
Such grandiose
But what makes it more surprising
Is a girl sleeping inside

The most beautiful creature
My eyes had laid upon
The soft skin
Her unusual hair
That gives diamond like colors
They change into many hues
For I can't believe it's true
With butterfly wings on her back
Started to wave up and down
Losing my mind from its track
She lives inside the diamond

Waking up with crystalline eyes
Staring straight at me
She looks just to mesmerism
So pleasant to see
She stood up as she sings
To make me feel the feint in heart
Shivers down had to bring
As the music had to...
START!!!!

(Chorus)--------------

Inside the diamond
A girl dances wild
Phase away the lament
She feels like a child
Inside the diamond
The music feels alive
It feels so grand
The dancing is to strive
------------------------

And the diamonds around
Glittering around the walls
Enticed by the sound
As my flesh has to fall
The cave goes wild
As she circles inside
Precious lost child
To me, you didn't... HIDE

(Long instrumental part)

(Chorus)

As I watch you from outside
Fallen down to her lust
To follow her ritual guide
Is there a bond between us

So dance again... dance again... dance again
Round and round and round AND ROUND!!!

(Guitar Solo 3)

Captured my soul
For her I fall
Emotions so weak
Now, it's time for you to speak

"O Diamonds of mine, O Diamonds of mine
It's time for the blessed sign
For those who wake me of my sleep
Shall watch me as I weep
Greed is held in your hands
To steal them for your grand
As you shall see me cry
And for those who stole my children... will...
DIE!!!"

Breathless, I have become
Sorcery of me to stun
Helpless I cannot move
Am I going to be doomed
Come the crystal walls
Encase me as I fall
She smiles as demands
I will die and become one her...
DIAMONDS!!!
NNNNOOOOO!!!!

I can't breath... I can't breath... I Ca...

"You are my child now!"

............................

In Mourning, The World Cremates

As the Earth breathes everyday
In crimson tears and sorrows
Another role on this play
Tragedies for many tomorrows
Many will die in battle
For a reason unknown
Bullets, leads, and metal
Cries on the sun’s dawn
The desert is filled with blood
From both sides, they suffer
Buried down inside the mud
The riches wouldn’t feel it matters

A child dies in its mother’s hands
Young father gets killed in foreign lands
Why should someone has to kill
Is it fair for him to go straight to HELL

(chorus)---------------------------

As the world burns
And the flames go on and on and on
Can’t you feel the fires and blood
Part of your own world
And it just goes on and on and on
Without anyone extinguishing the pain
Feel you own flames
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- “My dad is gone... he’ll never return!”
- “Ya habibi... ya habibi... Ya Allah!”
- “My son was only 21... he’s gone forever!”
- “Omar! Omar! Ebnee Omar mat!”
-”...but he promised to come back... he... promised!”
-”Haram wallah haram... erham ya Allah!”
- “God have mercy on all!”

Who are the heroes of these tales
And who can you call villains
Who is right and who is wrong
The wars are waging on
Questions never answered
None is willing to surrender
The fight is still alive and well
The Earth is going down to hell

Bleeding of so many hearts
Ripping the world apart
Can’t you hear the mourning
Everyone in here is suffering
Tears filled in both sides
Many have unfairly died
The youth, the elders, the women, the men, the entire human race
Can’t you feel all those sorrows

(Chorus)

(Guitar Solo 1)

Crimson deserts
Living hurts
Tortured souls
Many falls

No mercy is shown
When will it be gone
Hanged on the noose
Many shall lose
Violence everywhere
Living with despair
No sign of victory
Shall haunt history
...of a bleeding world

Hell on Earth

(Guitar Solo 2)

As many lands bleed
Let the SADNESS SING TO THE WORLD
AND STOP THE WARS

No more hate
No more tears
No more deaths
No more wars
(He’s shot! He’s shot)
No more fears
No more misery
(Ya La Ellah elah Allah)
No more sorrows
No more fights
(Please! Come back! Please)
(Ya benteh... Ya ebneh... Ya Aylteh... la)
No more sadness
No more anger
*Mournful cries*
No more, No more, No more
No, no, no, no
NNNNNNOOOOOOOO!!!

*Mournful cries*
The world is crying

....................

Dancing With Her (Shortening Distances)

You live oceans apart
Yet, we share one heart
A beautiful sweet angel
And the red color of you

We read out thoughts
And many we have wrote
But now, close your eyes
And try to visualize
That love is closer than you think

Dream of the stars

(Chorus)--------------

Dance away our shadows
Dancing between oceans blue
Dance away with me
Our hearts must be true
So, Dance again my love
A song is written just for you
------------------------

Stare at the twinkling stars
You may think we are so far
But hearts are shared as one
One day, I shall come

And dance together
In this sweet surrender
So always have you smile
Because the moon shall shine

Nothing is impossible
Like the stars glitter in the sky

(Chorus)

Enchanting the nights
With many of our writes
Sharing our thoughts
The pleasures we brought
YEAH!!!

(Guitar Solo)

(Chorus Repeat)----------

Dance away our shadows
Dancing between oceans blue
Dance away with me
Our hearts must be true
So, Dance again my love
A song is written just for you
--------------------------

Dance away on the stars
Dancing because we are free
Dance away my sweet
Take my hand and sway with me
So, Dance away my angel
Hope that day, we both would see

The shooting star in the sky
Is made just for you
On a beautiful magical night
And all will be true

.............................

Heaven or Hell

The keys are in your hands
Whichever the choice
A loving dove, erotic lust
Seduced by them memory glands
Entering your own voice
Shall I take the hand of trust

You fill me in darkness
The cells of desire
Across our bodies
Succubus of likeness
Eyes on you I admire
My sinful breeze

Which is the light you want me...
TO ENTER

(Guitar Lead 1)

Angelic voices are coming in mists
The Cerberus is a hound of loyalty
That respects your laws he admits
Kindness is disguised as cruelty

Your feel of Eden of this lewdness
For my love to you never yield
As the choirs' chords hits loudness
In secrecy of our bodies sealed

(Chorus)------------------

Is it love or lust?
The path I passion to choose
Is it day or night?
Anyway I want, I can never lose
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Celestial gates
Shines of oceans
Splits of fates
Glimpse devotions

Romantic scents of flowers
Blossomed in the never regions
None of these bitterness and sours
Admirably ripping away the never virgin

My choices are also yours
We drown in blasphemy together
It is colored in white
The scars shall remain forever

Dignity wasted from the start
As fast the blood pumps out of our hearts

(Chorus)

I CAN NEVER LOSE

(Guitar Solo)

Violet is the color I finally chose
For our bodies forever they SHALL ENCLOSE

(Chorus) x 2

There are smiles in both worlds

We deserve the reward of our lust
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