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Count_Grimith
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Joined: Mon Sep 20, 2004 8:57 pm
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 11, 2008 12:35 pm 
 
made this last night, guitar and bass are recorded from an amp/ drums are DI,vocals have light reverb/and EQ
and there ARE lyrics
peep it:

http://rapidshare.com/files/153014466/W ... b.mp3.html
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Count_Grimith
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:25 pm 
 
feedback would be appriciated!
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Manic616
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Joined: Wed Dec 05, 2007 12:01 pm
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Location: United Kingdom
PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:28 pm 
 
It starts to sounds very 'confused' (can't think of any other way to discribe it) after the half way mark. Not bad though.
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SepticTomb
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Joined: Fri Jul 25, 2008 11:56 pm
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PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:31 pm 
 
The stuff that sounds like Cock And Ball Torture is better than the stuff that sounds like brutal death, so stick with that.
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Pathological_Frolic
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Joined: Mon Jan 07, 2008 4:57 pm
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Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Sun Oct 12, 2008 12:51 pm 
 
Manic616 wrote:
It starts to sounds very 'confused' (can't think of any other way to discribe it) after the half way mark. Not bad though.

Maybe "Disjointed", but I don't get that feel.

It wasn't bad at all for goregrind-ish stuff.
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accidentalholocaust
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Joined: Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:48 am
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Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:36 am 
 
its pretty good, the only thing you need is the get the vox higher in the mix.
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Count_Grimith
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PostPosted: Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:57 pm 
 
thanks for the feedback, i think ill do another mix and make it sound a little more "professional" im still a beginner at mixing and mastering, but ill see how i can make it sound better. thanks again! oh and the myspace is:
http://www.myspace.com/karnageking
(its not done yet)
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blood_and_fire
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Joined: Wed Jun 04, 2008 8:26 pm
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Location: Canada
PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:28 pm 
 
I love you logo so much its not even funny.
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Sunkist
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Joined: Thu Oct 02, 2008 7:17 pm
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:50 pm 
 
It all sounds a bit flat. The riffs are fine but you need to mix it better.
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