Not really metal as such, but here's a vocal cover I did of Marilyn Manson's In the Shadow of the Valley of Death. Any feedback would be much appreciated!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KbOsKOedof8

Not bad dude, you've definitely taken a lot of ques from him with your style. There are a couple of times you fall a little out of key, but it seems to mainly be you are just climbing a little too high. At a few other bits I can't hear you as well as I can hear Manson, and because of how similar you sound it makes it difficult to discern between you and him.

Over all though, I think you are definitely on the right track! Sounding really good.

Thanks for the feedback/constructive criticism. Yeah, pitch has always been my weakness unfortunately but I'm gradually improving with practice.

The positive feedback is much appreciated!