Apart from the theme and the lyrics which may greatly overshadow the music, I am here, after many almost-mediocre attempts, trying to do a decent piece. Let me hear your thoughts.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mh8GolY9b0

Thanks

why anti zionist?

My guess would be because he's from Lebanon. Arabs and Jews aren't known for being the best of friends.

The reason is pretty clear: "Israel" is an illegal criminal state. We, the Lebanese people and the Palestinians, have suffered from their insanity, wars and massacres.

infinitenexus, there's one thing that should be clarified: "Arabs and ZIONISTS" please, not Jews. We absolutely have no problems with Jewish people and Judaism as a religion, our main issue is with Zionism and all the extremist movements in the world.

Hey man, this is by far your best song yet. Good work for sure. Sorry for taking so long to review your new release, I've taken a bit of a hiatus from reviewing because of university.

dystopia4, thank you mate! Oh, no worries at all, I do understand the concerns of your university!

By the way, my project was removed from MA due to not being enough metal! So no need to review it anymore and if you've already done that, please PM it

I like it,dont get me wrong,just wondering where your beliefs came from,anyways,good stuff!

norcalslayings, no worries! I do understand that and thanks

No more politics in the musicians forum please, you're welcome to discuss it in The Tavern but it's just a distraction from constructive discussion of music here.

About the song:

I like what you're doing with the exotic-sounding scale for the first riff, it could work out well but it drags on forr a really long time and it constantly goes off time. The timing really kills it.

The ride cymbal that you use starting around one minute in is too loud. I'm not listening on the best speakers at the moment but I think this might be from using an ill-fitting MIDI sample set for the drums.

Everything is off-time in the section starting around 3:30. The crashes sound really out of place but I think the guitars are playing somewhere between the beats.

The section at the end could sound really cool but you need to work out the timing with your delayed guitar, and you should also slow down the drums a lot, play a regular backbeat much slower and make sure the timing is good with the delay - set it to half the length of each note for a cool effect. Right now it sounds like the song is falling apart because of the timing.

Zodijackyl, yes I actually made sure to point out in my original post that the lyrics (politics) may greatly overshadow the music, so I am here asking for musical opinions only.

I see what you're trying to say here and I'll definitely consider that in any future project, thanks

Drums sounds like an awfully programmed midi loop.
Guitar riffs are boring repetitive and fuitle.
The vocals...well I rather not talk about that.
This song is awful.

Israel belong to the jews, arabs can go to Egypt, Lebanon, Syria, Iraq, Jordan or any other shitty arab country in this world.
If the Arabs agreed to the "United Nations Partition Plan" in 1947 instead of declaring war against the jews, you could have your own country. Now you should suffer as you deserve and make us suffer as well with your lame burzum cloned tracks.

What part of "no politics" from Zodi's warning did you miss? That said, OP was obviously inflammatory, so yeah consider yourselves both warned.

Not a fan of what I'm hearing. The drums, guitars and vocals have lives of their own with absolutely no rhythmical connection between them, and also I'd like to believe music making takes more than randomly picking notes until something sticks. "Keep trying" would be my final verdict, I guess.

I hear some kind of booming and can't tell if it is intentional percussion or a vocal artifact from not using a pop screen. Either way it is far too loud, check at around 1:17 for what I am talking about. Some of the slow single note riffing with spoken vocals reminds me of the band Bethlehem, but yeah the timing is a major problem.

There's clearly still work to be done but it's your best song so far. Keep at it!

The guitars sound like the pitch was changed in audacity. I say that because at some points in the song it sounds like the guitar is breaking up a little bit or becoming distorted in a bad way.