I like your vocal style, it's actually pretty much exactly how I do my vocals, how it's a lot lower than the original. More like brutal DM than old school DM. I just have to say that they sound a bit, I don't know, weak? I feel like if you push the air out faster it'll sound harsher, like the difference between bass guitar and distorted bass guitar. I can't comment on the guitar or anything else, but it sounds fine. Glad to see that someone else uses my vocal style, maybe I'm doing something right after all.


Overall, nice job!

Yeah, I'm not a vocalist. I don't know about you, but the more air I push out the more my throat hurts. I can't really do more than one song in a day haha. All my music is instrumental now and I haven't done vocals in about 8 years, but I wanted to add them to this to make it a more complete cover (just missing bass).

Yea my only thing I would've said was the vocals how they were more brutal death style and it looks like you are kissing the mic every time you say a line. But good job, appreciate that you actually played the drums to it so more props on that from me.