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Rustic Existence
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Joined: Mon Oct 24, 2011 1:46 am
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 12:41 am 
 

Right now it's instrumental but we plan on getting a vocalist soon. Please let me know what y'all think!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kSZDUD3geiE&feature=channel&list=UL
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infinitenexus
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:43 am 
 

It's always hard for me to properly gauge a song without vocals, as they really help add color and variety (when done right, at least). Overall, not bad. I would say get rid of just a touch of mid range in the guitar tone (to get rid of the kind of "honk" sound it has) and add just a bit more body, more low end. Not much, as you don't want to drown out the bass or anything, but I would add just a tiny bit more, for thickness. Also, the drums are too quiet. The kick has a nice click to it, though.
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FenrirFangs
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PostPosted: Thu Oct 11, 2012 8:58 pm 
 

I dig it for sure. I liked "Fight For Your Death" a lot more, but this one is cool too. I'd love to front you guys.

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somefella
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2012 12:58 am 
 

The song seems a bit too midpaced for me. Some of the riffs would sound a lot more interesting if the overall energy of the song was carried by a quicker tempo. And the drumming could use more variation. I'd love to hear this with vocals though, keep working on it !
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Rustic Existence
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PostPosted: Fri Oct 12, 2012 4:55 pm 
 

Thanks for the feedback guys! Yeah I can see what you mean with the guitar tone now that you've brought it up. and FenirFangs just come down too Kansas man!
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