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Melkor_Grimm
Metal newbie

Joined: Wed Jan 13, 2010 8:30 pm
Posts: 40
PostPosted: Sun Mar 03, 2013 4:15 am 
 

Hi everyone

This is the most recent track from my ambient black metal project Abysmal Dirge. I do the vocals in this track, inspired strongly by Burzum, I'm in a Coffin, Hypothermia etc. Any feedback on the vocals and song in general would be appreciated!

https://soundcloud.com/abysmaldirge/a-w ... n-the-tree

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Grave_Wyrm
Metalhead

Joined: Sun Mar 04, 2012 5:55 pm
Posts: 2114
Location: At the bottom of the lake
PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:10 pm 
 

It didn't change at all and then turned into a punk song. It lacked atmosphere of nearly any kind. sorry, mate. didn't like it.

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Apteronotus
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Joined: Thu Jun 18, 2009 9:07 am
Posts: 851
PostPosted: Mon Mar 04, 2013 11:43 pm 
 

I'm with Grave_Wyrm on this, far too repetitive. That main riff just does not have the carrying power to take up so much time. The vocals were pretty maniacal tonally and I liked that, but they didn't feel at all connected with the rest of the music, just kind of laid on top of everything without regard for the underlying rhythm or melody.

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