This is the completed version of the first track from my gothic rock/metal project Nightshaede (except for some final editing/mixing):

http://soundcloud.com/abysmaldirge/gothic-rock-song-1

I do the vocals in this track. Any feedback would be much appreciated!

Sounds like Marylin Manson, Cradle of Filth, and the soundtrack to Luigi's Mansion thrown into a blender.

To be perfectly honest, it kind of sounds like a parody of Gothic rock/metal. I just thought it sounded a bit too goofy, but maybe it's just me.

It's pretty good but the vocals need a bit of improving.

same song asking the same question on two different threads? Ok, vocals need some work, not alot though. Also music could be much better.