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Karni
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:19 pm
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Location: Israel
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 1:54 pm 
 

http://youtu.be/bV32JtSLw_I

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Zodijackyl
Lazy Wizard

Joined: Wed Apr 30, 2008 5:39 pm
Posts: 5011
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 6:30 pm 
 

It sounds like Emmure with random double bass runs on a drum machine. The drums and guitars sound completely disconnected from each other, and the song doesn't flow at all. Try simplifying it and getting the guitar and drums to sound like they go together, and getting the song to flow from one section to another. Experiment with transitions to move from one part to another.

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SweetSilence
Metalhead

Joined: Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:52 pm
Posts: 433
Location: United States
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 8:40 pm 
 

On the other hand, I really enjoyed every part of it.

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Karni
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:19 pm
Posts: 14
Location: Israel
PostPosted: Sat Aug 04, 2012 10:26 pm 
 

thanks . .. i added bass to it http://youtu.be/iahLSwbiLvs

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Ricin
Metal newbie

Joined: Mon Sep 12, 2011 6:25 pm
Posts: 104
Location: The Crown of Sidley
PostPosted: Mon Aug 06, 2012 2:07 pm 
 

Did you play this or use a program, if so, what program?
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Karni
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:19 pm
Posts: 14
Location: Israel
PostPosted: Wed Aug 08, 2012 4:48 pm 
 

i play the guitar ... and bass.. the drums programmed ... ezdrummer drum kit from hell and NI battery

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SweetSilence
Metalhead

Joined: Mon Dec 14, 2009 8:52 pm
Posts: 433
Location: United States
PostPosted: Thu Aug 09, 2012 3:51 pm 
 

Do you have lyrics? I'd like to record some vocals on top of it. I sound a bit like Lord Worm mixed with the guy from Carnifex.

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Syntek
Metalhead

Joined: Mon Sep 13, 2010 1:14 pm
Posts: 620
Location: United Kingdom
PostPosted: Fri Aug 10, 2012 8:27 pm 
 

Record the guitars twice, and pan one to your left ear and one to your right. It'll make the guitar tone sound more expansive, and less weak. Well, either that or the kick drum is too high in the mix.

But very solid guitarwork, man. Very good indeed.

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Karni
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:19 pm
Posts: 14
Location: Israel
PostPosted: Tue Aug 14, 2012 6:58 pm 
 

SweetSilence and Syntek first thanks ... and two - talk to me in a private message tell me what you want to do add to track and we'll see...

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Unseenperception
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:10 am
Posts: 8
Location: Netherlands
PostPosted: Tue Aug 21, 2012 4:53 am 
 

hmmm, link removed.

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Karni
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Jun 22, 2012 5:19 pm
Posts: 14
Location: Israel
PostPosted: Fri Aug 24, 2012 2:06 pm 
 

i know ... heres the full songs http://www.facebook.com/pages/Feats-of-Kontratata/448034318551344

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