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Poe Ohlin
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Joined: Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:20 pm
Posts: 132
Location: United States
PostPosted: Thu Dec 29, 2011 7:38 pm 
 

Just a thread in which I will post some of the songs I have written. Please no trolling or excessive bashing.

Buried Alive by Poe Ohlin
As time goes on
My skin turns yellow
Hair falls out
And my eyes become hollow

Maggots dig into my skin
Eating my flesh away
Tendons start to show
My intestines fall out

The skeleton falls apart
Cracking from age
It turns yellow
As they sink into the soil

As I turn into dust
I have truly ended
I have decomposed
Ashes to ashes

Deathsaw by Poe Ohlin
Standing over your body
Tied to the wall
Watching you squirm and scream
As you try to live

Sharpening the rusted
Preparing for the thrill
Listening to the rip
Insides spilling out
Your shit everywhere

Standing in the mud
Maggots everywhere
Your lowers' filled with me
Aint it f*****g great

Morbid Eclipse by Poe Ohlin
When the clouds dissipate
And the sky darkens
The urges to inflict start again
And my mind takes the toll

As the sun becomes black
And the blood begins to spill
Fear strikes the hearts of humans
As the scent of death fills my nostrils
I get high from my mayhem

As bodies fall behind me
Fetuses ripped from the womb
So I can feed on the stem cells
To reform my organs

As the sun becomes the moon
And I start to fade
I look at the morbid eclipse
For my final sight before I die

Morrrrrrrrbidddd ECLIPSE!

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CapricornSupernaut
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Joined: Sun Aug 07, 2011 2:38 pm
Posts: 392
Location: United Kingdom
PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 5:18 pm 
 

The Lyrical Feedback thread would be better for posting songs. They're pretty good by the way.

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Poe Ohlin
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Joined: Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:20 pm
Posts: 132
Location: United States
PostPosted: Fri Dec 30, 2011 11:15 pm 
 

Thanks for the tip man and thanks for the feedback.

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