I recently uploaded a tiny bit of rough riffage onto my MySpace. It's nowhere near perfect, and it sounds like shit, but it's just an idea. What does everyone think about it?

http://www.myspace.com/misainzigfortress

Feedback on intro song also welcome.

The intro song I didn't much like, the riff I loved, though.

Acoustic intro song, I loved. That is really great.

The "riffage" is good too, it sounds kind of like "Yesterday Don't Mean Shit" by Pantera, which is a good thing. Nothing too special, but it's good. Keep working at it, you seem capable of some pretty good shit. =]

First song i could care less about, it would be a good intro for a song but needs work. I loved the very beginning of the "riffage" thing but the rest of it I didn't like, unless you can add to it. But that's just my opinion because i really can't stand alternate-picked, single-note riffs all by themselves (i think they're kind of lazy). But if you could build off that beginning part it would be great.