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DeadSkies
Mallcore Kid

Joined: Fri Sep 12, 2008 5:07 pm
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Location: Switzerland
PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 3:57 pm 
 

I just started to write some music and I made a song, it is called "He From The Cold Deepness". I just wanted to know what you think about it!

Here is the link:

http://www.myspace.com/deadskiesband

Let me know what you think!

Thanks a lot!

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Diamhea
Eats and Spits Corpses

Joined: Wed Feb 14, 2007 7:46 pm
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Location: At the Heat of Winter
PostPosted: Sun Nov 23, 2008 6:41 pm 
 

I thought it sounded good! Vocals?
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agentsteel666
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Joined: Mon Aug 18, 2008 9:45 pm
Posts: 456
Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 1:05 am 
 

The "lead" guitar part (guitar harmony) was pretty elementary and not really my thing. I liked like the first 20 seconds and another part somewhere in the middle. I would say do less of the strumming on one note for your basic element of the song. I'm not so into that kind of stuff. I like riffs based in the pentatonic scale. it sounds like something a harsh vocalist would sing over, and I think that would just totally turn me off to it completely. If you had a Bruce Dickinson or Joey Belladona type voice, it might turn out kind of original and different.

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Misainzig
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Joined: Sat Apr 07, 2007 9:30 pm
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 1:14 am 
 

I think the riffing at the very beginning is just too generic, but it gets better. At 0:31, it just starts getting progressively better, and I can say I enjoyed the rest.
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mattp
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Joined: Sun Jun 11, 2006 9:57 pm
Posts: 2910
PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 1:35 am 
 

The "Unknown Skies" song is very good, I liked it a lot.

Basic mixing problem, but the right guitar is louder than the left in the beginning.

The composition of the song is fairly generic, but if you work on and develop your style to include more of the atmosphere and symphonic elements in your metal, it'll be excellent.

A great start!
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thejestersgate
Metal newbie

Joined: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:52 am
Posts: 230
Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 11:22 am 
 

I liked both songs. The last one is very groove but you do it well. Good job and good luck.

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overkill666
Metalhead

Joined: Mon Dec 10, 2007 12:43 pm
Posts: 1496
Location: United States
PostPosted: Mon Nov 24, 2008 12:52 pm 
 

I liked em both. Good work.
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shibby2441
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Joined: Thu Jan 19, 2006 4:40 am
Posts: 100
Location: United States of America
PostPosted: Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:23 pm 
 

Not really my thing but sounds very good.
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