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Ozenrol
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:34 pm 
 

been making some attempts at logos lately. Most other sites i post these on only offer "lolneat", so any serious comments or criticisms would be greatly appreciated.
These are the more serious ones i've done lately.

Dagoth Ur
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Isen
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Your Anti God (last.fm account photo)
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frozenaeons
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 7:44 pm 
 

They're all different styles, but I personally like the last two better than the first. The Ur part just doesn't flow with the rest of the logo. All in all, good stuff. Keep working and you'll have some bad ass logos.
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Sunkist
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 9:30 pm 
 

Isen and Dagoth Ur looks pretty killer.

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wasteful
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 15, 2008 10:26 pm 
 

the first two aren't bad, though the first carries more of a "digital/photoshop" look than i personally care for.

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RegularK
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:12 am 
 

I really like the Isen one. I'm not a fan of the other two logos style though.

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warfighter67
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:26 am 
 

i like all but the isen one, i just believe it looks like a line of four spikey-like lines. the dragoth ur is my favorite
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wasteful
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 11:10 am 
 

warfighter67 wrote:
i like all but the isen one, i just believe it looks like a line of four spikey-like lines. the dragoth ur is my favorite


i agree that the "s" in isen could benefit from bending left and then right just a bit to more easily indicate the letter it is meant to represent.

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DGYDP
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:05 pm 
 

I only like the last one, the second is too "thin" and the first just doesn't feel right.
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The_Beast_in_Black
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 12:27 pm 
 

The first one strikes me quite a lot, but it seems to have too much bare space. Maybe you could do something with the empty area in the U, perhaps add some kind of prop or other such embellishment.
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firescarredmartyr
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:03 pm 
 

The Dagoth Ur one looks kinda furry. It's a good start, but I think it'd be better if it were more jagged.

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Diamhea
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:07 pm 
 

I actually like the first one the most.
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renegade498
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 16, 2008 8:09 pm 
 

I love Elder scrolls...
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Warlocks_amulet
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:03 am 
 

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More to the point, the first one looks good, the second one looks kinda like a fence to me, and the third one wasn't really the kind I like.

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Ozenrol
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PostPosted: Tue Nov 18, 2008 1:53 am 
 

Oi, thanks for the suggestions. Going to be working a bit more on them, especially the first one.

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blood_and_fire
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 1:23 am 
 

Well, there better than anything I've ever done, mine usually end up really odd.

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