I just recorded few songs, vocals only, and I wan to know what do you think, please.

Please forgot me if I miss lyrics somewhere, i am not very good in english pronaunciation and if there are some problems with microphone.

http://rapidshare.com/files/152627235/vocals.rar.html

You need to sing m8. Open your mouth and sing loudly and proudly.
Reading the lyrics in a strange dramatic way is not singing.

Don't let this ruin your motivation though. Just gain confidence and do it, you know...

Thank you for the honest comment and advice!! I will try to keep that in my mind.

Yeah, I'd agree. You can tell you have a good singing voice, however you seem to be restrained from putting your everything into it - this can easily be taken care of through a build up of your confidence. Don't be afraid to push your voice to the limits, even if it means you mess up a little. Enjoy yourself and don't be shy and your vocals will be sounding even better.