Lich Coldheart
Stares into the Void
Joined: Tue Jun 11, 2013 12:44 pm Posts: 985 Location: Romania
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Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2015 3:19 am |
Greetings. I looks like I am need of help once again since 5 of my reviews got almost simultaneously rejected. Sorry for being such a burden. "Spreading the Disease" by Anthrax. Review title: "She'll take you to the very depths of hell" Rejection message:
This is poorly written and doesn't really describe the music. This is commentary that is generally about the band and perception of their music, but almost this entire thing is so vague it doesn't really have anything of value. For example:
"Not only does it fucking rock during the entire listening experience but it also represents an era when Anthrax would implement real ideas into their music"
Why and how does it rock? Babbling about "the big four" and completely missing the point of talking about this album makes this entire thing a waste of time.
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For some reason, people usually tend to underrate Anthrax quite a lot, saying they're not even worthy of being one of the Big 4 (which I also stated myself at some point). The truth is their music lacks Slayer's brutality, Metallica's (early) ideas and Megadeth's rawness, but they are all replaced by a strong amount of vitality that can be especially felt on their early releases such as <i>Spreading the Disease</i>. Quite disappointing at the first two or three listens, this album proves to be really good once you've gotten into it.
Not only does it fucking rock during the entire listening experience but it also represents an era when Anthrax would implement <i>real</i> ideas into their music, which cannot be said about the <i>forcefully</i> created material from albums such as <i>Volume 8 - The Threat Is Real</i> or <i>We've Come for You All</i>. Songs like "Alpha Male" and "Cadillac Rock Box" succeed in making those releases <i>listenable</i> but, in comparison to <i>Spreading the Disease</i>, they lack the youthful energy that is emanated both by the vocals and the instruments (hell, Anthrax weren't that old in 2003!), the killing guitar riffs, the vitality of the drums and the blowing up moments when everything goes insane and seems to be willing to tear the fucking world apart (which happens in songs like "A.I.R." and "Madhouse"). With rebel and energetic guitars that sound reminiscent to Megadeth's Mechanix rather than dark in the way of Testament, the album manages to create a crazy <i>unchaining</i> atmosphere which is imbued with powerful and as fast as if followed by the police on the highway to freedom drum beats. And if the instruments alone fail to drag you into this pestilential state, then Belladonna's aggressive and blasting vocals will surely succeed.
I must confess that if this release was to spread the thrash, then I am certainly diseased. Anthrax took the loads of energy from their two demos, added some dexterity that was provided by the years of experience, wrote some brilliant lyrics and, if you count the better production (yet not flawless), too, you get to wonder what the hell happened to this extraordinary band whose most of the later releases can't even dream of reaching these heights.
"I'm Not Jesus" by Apocalyptica Review title: Vengeance and perverted cellos Rejection message:
Once again, this is kind of off-point and focuses mostly on commentary about the guest vocalist's career and some dissimilar comparisons that aren't really explained well enough to be understandable.
Note: this review was previously rejected or deleted by theunrelentingattack for the following reason: Move on from this one - it's just not very good. You've had much better.
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Despite featuring Corey Taylor, the vocalist of the nu metal band Slipknot, who is not usually very appreciated by metalheads for his singing style, the song "I'm Not Jesus" is an experiment that is actually pretty successful. The intro that consists of a weird sinister cello creates a creepy atmosphere that is nothing more than the calm before the storm. Suddenly everything blows up: the aggressive cellos, the mad cymbals, the powerful drums and Taylor's furious voice, all of them blaming the Christianity for being unfair: <i>Jesus wasn't fair</i>.
Not very fast, though, the song can be compared to Metallica's "Sad but True" in terms of speed. Corey's singing is neither too harsh nor too soft, being somewhere between <i>Snuff</i> and <i>Psychosocial</i> (both Slipknot songs) and the cello seems, for a certain reason that I can't figure out, reminiscent to the brutal guitar from the intro of Slayer's "Raining Blood". The cymbals and the drums are both loud and sound violent, the speed varying according to the rage of the cellos.
Overall, the track is actually well done. Judging it in terms of heavy metal, it would've sounded much better if Taylor had tried to sing in a way that sounded less like nu metal, but judging it in terms of music it's a remarkable track. The way he expresses hatred and rejection to the wrong ways of Christianity ("you hippocratic messiah and child abusive turned satanic") and a notable quantity of vengeance, as well, ("I'm not Jesus, I will not forgive") is unique and couldn't have been done without some chaotic influences of his Slipknot version of nu metal.
"Trance-Like State" by Dreamscape - a strange review, I admit. Review title: "The sun breaks through the clouds of pain" Rejection message:
I think you're trying to write in an illustrative style far beyond what you can really manage with your writing skill. That entire first paragraph is just puzzling. Please don't resubmit old reviews that had been rejected without asking for feedback on the forums in the feedback megathread. These few reviews have been missing the point.
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As the band Zonata sang on their <i>Tunes of Steel</i> album: "welcome to this world of fun". You can join Snow White in eating an apple, do some housework with Cinderella, hunt some witches with Hansel and Gretel (if you are the adventurous type), admire Charming's shining armor (if you're a girl), or spend a day with Shrek in the marshes (if you like stinky ogres...). If none of these entertaining activities succeed in tempting you, then you can always join Dreamscape in the dangerous but wonderful journey to the <i>center of time</i>.
During your journey you will live strong emotions that vary from creepiness ("Spirits"), sadness ("One and a Million") and loneliness ("Loneliness") to nostalgia and hope ("It's Not the End"), doubt ("Decisions") and a trance-like state once you have reached your destination (the "Center of Time"), all of them being accompanied by the strong courage that helped you "Face Your Fears". The fantasy atmosphere, no matter it's dark, scaring, energetic or encouraging, will put you through mysterious and unforgettable experiences and through strong emotional contradictions, as well.
You'd better hurry up because most of the tickets have already been sold to powerful guitars that are riffing impatiently and in a heavier way than any of Amorphis' latest releases (such as <i>Circle</i>), overwhelming with their energy and their melodic rhythms, as well. The drums have also joined in along with loud and brilliant beats like in Sonata Arctica's early works (I've always compared this album to Sonata's <i>Ecliptica</i>), compensating the hardly-audible bass. The gentle keyboards have been invited as guests to contribute to the releasing of the tension, even though their presence is not as strong as on Darkestrah's <i>Manas</i>. And for the experience to be complete, the ballads <i>One and a Million</i> and <i>Final Thoughts</i> have been brought to play the role of tear dropping masterpieces, everything coming in flawless production.
We can guarantee that you will not regret joining us in this wonderful journey. Such great adventures can be lived only in Cradle of Filth's <i>The Manticore and Other Horrors</i>, Nightwish's <i>Once</i> and Therion's <i>Lemuria</i>, which are all recommended for lovers of (dark) fairy tale atmosphere, heavy instruments and remarkable skills. Note: <i>We don't consider ourselves responsible for any loss of memory caused by the trance-like state. Any brain damages that one may suffer will be dealt with in the nearest hospital. The pay will be made from his/her own money. No recovery is guaranteed.</i>
"Eye of the Beholder" by Metallica Review title: In Black and White Rejection message:
Longwinded, full of grammatical errors, and makes poor use of the sheer number of words used to describe the selection of the B-side track.
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As the obsessed metalhead that I am, I have been listening to thousands of metal songs only in the last two years, the genres varying from symphonic, power and progressive metal to death, black and grindcore (on the metal side)... And yet the surprise had to come when I saw the tracklist of this single. Hard as I may try, I still couldn't figure out why the band decided to put the songs <i>Eye of the Beholder</i> and <i>Breadfan</i> on the same release. If their intention was to create a kind of the "beauty and the beast", "yin and yang" or "Tristan and the bitch-Isolda" atmosphere, they definitely failed as these two songs together don't sound stylistic at all.
The thrashing (and slowed down, though) <i>Eye of the Beholder</i> fades in and stuns with the determination and seriousness that the band seem to be playing with. The riffs are reminiscent to those used in <i>Creeping Death</i> and <i>Fight Fire with Fire</i>, highlighting Metallica's lacking of creativity, which doesn't make the song sound redundant, though. The drums are played in a <i>nice</i> manner, with no violence or high speed, which is a fact that doesn't prevent the cymbals to sound quite energetic. Hetfield's performance is softer compared to the one from band's earlier (<i>Kill 'em All</i>) and even later releases (<i>Death Magnetic</i>), completely lacking screams and aggressiveness. To sum up, these elements manage to compensate the bass that seems to be completely missing and offer a listening experience that is truly enjoyable.
On the other hand, the Budgie cover, <i>Breadfan</i>, is just a loud and annoying track that ruins the impact of the previous song. High speed, violence and heaviness, all used in order to underline the ultimate feature of the song that has been known since long forgotten ages as... dumbness (I mean "bread fan" ?! C'mon...). Lyrically, the song is a failure and musically, although heavy and fast as I have already mentioned, it seems to be just a bad joke that Metallica tested on their fans; the rhythm is as dull as the one of the <i>Sleeping in My Car</i> cover performed by Children of Bodom! The guitars and the drums try to create some kind of <i>funny</i> atmosphere as on Anthrax's <i>Friggin' in the Riggin'</i> but fail, James sings in a way that makes me think he's working in a kindergarten (<i>C'mon, kids, won't you come out to play?</i>) and the bass... where is the fucking bass, anyway?
As for the overall experience, the brilliant <i>Eye of the Beholder</i> and the awful Budgie cover turn this single into a mediocre release (as you can I see, I gave it a score of just 60%). If they had used <i>So What</i> or <i>Am I Evil?</i> instead of <i>Breadfan</i> the listen would have been really enjoyable, but Metallica has been known for being spiraling down for a very long time and this bad decision is not quite surprising. Still, from a band with a reputation this high so much more can be expected.
"First Demo" by Anthrax Review title: The flu before the anthrax Rejection message:
Not written nearly well enough to get the point across. Writing more wouldn't help, this simply isn't acceptable.
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Strong guitars with a huge load of crazy riffs and lots of reminiscences to Iron Maiden, loud drums, bad sounding cymbals, youthful vocals and a huge wave of energy - these are what the very first demo released by Anthrax consists of. Into the core of these four tracks lie the seeds of rebellion that spread through riffs whose aggressiveness has been kept only on the <i>Fistful of Metal</i> release, drums that sound louder that on any other Anthrax record and energetic vocals that highlight the "we don't care where we fit" idea better than <i>I'm the Man</i> ever managed to. Lots of ideas seems to have been merged into these songs like the recording of <i>Across the River</i> as an intro to <i>Howling Furies</i>, which was also used on their first full-length. Too bad this demo comes with such bad production...
I did my best to describe the music. I tried to compare the albums (single/demo) to other releases or songs by the other bands, or to other releases by the same band, I did my best to use epithets... I mean I didn't write them superficially, I really spent several hours writing them. Any kind of criticism that could improve my skills is welcome... and even the one that wouldn't bring any improvement at all. I think I deserve it all. Thanks in advance.
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